This is great stuff... More more.
JG

Love the story. The characters were all awesome. Great job.

Hey Abregaza,
this was a great story, well rounded and written in a style I have very much enjoyed.
I especially loved your comments at the end of the chapters. For sure I will never forget this very first story of yours I read!

Thank you very much and please go on with writing! I'm sure I will continue reading your stories.

magno.**.gaudio :)

Thank you for sharing your stroy with us, not wonder your stories have so much emotion put in them!
Please keep writting because i always read your stories over and over again.
I think your handeling everything so well, and i also had a best friend whic was in a tragic accident which i witnessed and it felt as thought when it happened both our lives flashed before me, but thankfully she is still with me s i can't possibly imagine what you went through.

Great story i loved it! and im sorry about your friend i know what its like to lose someone close to you.

hi - i just bumped into this story through other peoples favourite story - and i wanted to say that i really enjoyed reading it- thanks- OD

Aww! I love this ending! I am such an incurable romantic and love seeing Logan and Max together. Thanks.

"She took his mouth and began to plunder it..." This is a great line. I can visualize Max doing... well, you know the plundering. Classic.

"Deeper flavor that was something distinctly Max." Heat sounds like fun. I want my own transgenic female...

The bit about the poem was great. The way he wrote it watching her sleeping in the marginal light... expecting her to wake and see it and confess her feelings, especially after the dream sequence. Then Bling finds it and calls Logan on it. (Insert manly grunt here...) Didn't see it coming.

Her sarcastic explanation of a poem was funny. It was typical Max. The scene at Crash was great. No struggle, no strife... just a bunch of friends having a great time. Excellent story here. Don't remember if I reviewed before or not but had to since I'm reading stories out of my folders.

Loved it Abregaza


Just curious... what's a chicken and salad roll? Is that like chicken salad on a roll or do is that like a chicken and a salad rolled together... :) Just kidding... couldn't resist.

'Began to plunder...' Funniest thing I've read in ages.

Well, one thing about the slowing down of M/L stories and the influx of M/A stuff is that it leaves me with less to read and more time to catch up on the things I'd meant to read and yet never found the time for. I'm definately glad that I got to this one.

I'm not quite sure how I missed it the first time, but I'm really enjoying it now. (And I could tell by the notes within the chapters that you had fun writing it - a mark of good fanfic is that, above all, you have fun!)

This was very sweet, definitely cute, and stocked full of M/L shippery goodness! I'll be eagerly awaiting any sequels that you may be considering. (That and any updates to His Eyes Only . . . :)

Hi I loved this story so much and I can't wait for the sequel. It is wonderful to find M/L writers still writing :)

wonderful

Awww, I loved it! I can't wait for the sequel, keep up the good work!

That was a great story, I loved the whole solution to Max'x little 'problem'.
My sympathies to you about your friend, it really sucks when young, and brilliant people die. We(my peers at school) lost a very good friend in a tragic football accident and on the day we graduated we honored him by giving his little bro his diploma. He was a great football player and person.
And in response to your saying I suggest you listen to Lee Ann Womacks song on her newest CD thats called"Something Worth Leaving Behind" It's very similar to what you wrote. It's my fave song.
Well, by for now, keep on the stories, they're good.Love reading them.

Hi, I just wanted to tell you how much I loved your story. You are a great writer. Kathy was right. Thank you for sharing your experience with us. It was really touching. Even though I didn't know Kathy, I'm sure she must have been a great person, too good to live in this world. I've always thought that people like that die young because they are called to achieve something great and are looking out for us. It may be silly, but I just wanted to share that with you. Anyway, I'll be waiting to read more of your stories. Take care.