|Reviews for On The Wing|
| GaBeRock 8/21/12 . chapter 9
nice chapter. just a note: Kvekya already means lightning in the ancient language. Was Eldingblìxt a different way to say lightning, a different variety of lightning, or just a mistake? anyways, Good luck writing!
| Elemental Dragon Slayer 8/20/12 . chapter 9
nice chapter :D
sword parts were cool. I thought Kveykva was lightning in the ancient language, I saw it once in one of the books I think... hum. never mind, a minor thing at most. and a nice long chapter again I see XD
it wasn't as much of a filler, but I think you need to start rolling the plot on a bit. All this description and talking is getting a tad tedious, no offence (please don't hate me).
| Elemental Dragon Slayer 8/13/12 . chapter 8
nice chapter :D bit of a filler but if there's action coming up, no prob.
Like how Miles just stares at Eragon, etc (in the rain!) as she's having a mind blank XD snap back to reality Miles...
| Miranda Jones1 8/9/12 . chapter 7
I am really enjoying what you have so far, so please keep writing. It seems like the best fan fiction out there are the stories that haven't been discovered by the masses. I'm glad I found yours. Please keep writing. Regards, Miranda.
| Elemental Dragon Slayer 8/8/12 . chapter 7
woo, great chapter again :D and long again... which is now a good thing. XD
detail/descriptions were really good in this chapter, top stuff. Just sorta noticed that when reading for some reason.
New swords, yeah. Now I wonder what Miles and Thad are gonna name them...
| Fireball5184 8/7/12 . chapter 7
This is one of the best post-inheritance stories that I've read.
| eragon0123 8/7/12 . chapter 7
Actually you update at a pretty well speed. Don't do anything to rush your writing. Just out of curiosity when will we see some action. It feels as if the story is becoming a little dull. I don't necessarily mean fighting when I say action.
| Elemental Dragon Slayer 8/3/12 . chapter 6
sweet chapter :D ah, poor Eragon... the burden must be pretty damn hard on him. (i think im finally used to your lengthy chapters, shock of shocks)
Miles and Thad seem cool still... classic Thad not being so flexible, for some reason the word fat just comes into my head when it shouldnt, sorry Thad XD
nice MxN bits there. sweet and not overdone. top stuff.
| Elemental Dragon Slayer 7/30/12 . chapter 5
sweet chapter :D (still long.. but now I actually like it. if it was short... i'd probably say it was too short XD)
ah, bit of Miles and Thad affection? liked it. good interaction and their backstories were pretty... well they weren't cliché or the same old. interesting to read. top stuff.
oh, bit of ExA and MxN mixed in? sweet.
| barb211 7/30/12 . chapter 5
I think this is the best chapter so far.
| eragon0123 7/29/12 . chapter 5
Both POVs were great. Eragon seemed in character. Don't forget that Eragon knows the Name of Names of the Ancient Language, he could literally remove Rhunon's oath. Though I don't think many people know that he knows the Name of the AL.
| Crystalbird1769 7/29/12 . chapter 5
Yes! Thanks for the Eragon PoV! This was a nice chapter. Miles is mysterious... for all I know she could be yet ANOTHER of Eragon's lost relatives! That title is legendary! :D
| Elemental Dragon Slayer 7/27/12 . chapter 4
nice chapter :D (long again... but never mind. im getting used to it XD)
Miles, Miles, Miles... what an unruly girl. makes her a good OC though.
Eragon and Arya conversing for well over an hour... any romance between them or are we focusing on Miles and Thad? (if so, no prob, just curious)
| Crystalbird1769 7/27/12 . chapter 4
Wow... I didn't think Eragon would go back to Ellesméra
And i have two questions to ask
1. Will you do an Eragon PoV?
2. (more like a comment) I think it was odd, but in the Inheritance, (or maybe Brisignr?) Eragon ate meat for awhile...
Awesome chapter! switching Pov's makes the story more interesting.
| adamln 7/27/12 . chapter 3
Fantastic! Loving the story so far.