I Like this far better than the original version.

BRAVO

..You are a genius. I mean it.

Before reading this story, I never knew what My Inner Life was until I looked it up.. dear gawd, how I wish I never had.

Anyway, this a hilarious story, a wonderfully thought out parody. Jenna is hilarious, Zelda is totally kick-butt, and Link is as funny as hell.

You were very creative with the plot and Jenna's eyes. I think it was appropriate to have the eyes as a source of her power, seeing as MY eyes are ruined after finding out what My Inner Life is..

Once again, bravo. I loved this story- it was hilarious and clever.

I meant to follow this but by the time I read it it was done...

Anyway, this is a fabulous story. I LOVE the ending. It is so adorable. And the moment where Zelda was like "He won't wake up until I take the sleeping spell off him," was just so kick butt. I especially loved Impa and uncursed Link, because Impa was just running around doing all the hard work off stage while Zelda got the action scenes and poking fun at Zelda, and uncursed Link was just such a nicer character than his cursed self I practically cheered when Jenna died. Except I didn't, because it was like 1 in the morning. Jenna really creeped me out...you managed to make her genuinely creepy. I really loved this.

YES! JENNA PARODY! I loved the flirty ZeLink ending, that was a nice finishing touch. JENNA IS A MAGICAL SUCCUBUS YES! Great job!

Ahh, I just found this randomly browsing Zelda fanfiction, and I found this! The way you turned Jenna into a succubus...Freaking Awesome! I'm sorry, I don't know what else to say except that this is awesome.:D I love the story, although i'm a wee bit disappointed its short. Meh, I'm still happy I found this!

Huzzah! The foul demon has been defeated! Let us feast!

Damn!
Poor guy, imagine if Zelda wouldnt just arrived in time.. he would have been almost raped by a monster ... OH jeez the memories..

Nice short story, very nice...

Thank God that monster is dead! Ugh, she was sick and wrong. But it was short, so I don't know if she's dead? I don't know. Great job!

Leila

Zelda! How dare she treat Mistress Jenna in such a way! I'm sure she's just planning on sucking Link's soul for you know... safe keeping. Or something. Right?

C'mon Zelda! Get it together, girl.

This chapter made me lawl so hard. Really, it wouldn't have surprised me if Jen in the original story was actually a succubus, but making her into one was pretty clever. Though, sadly, I can't really think of her as anything else but a Morrigan look-alike. Who knows, maybe you'll put batwings on her head, too? :B (At least she was cool in Darkstalkers.)

I didn't really see any faults in here, and if there are any, it had more to do with the original story than your writing. Even though you plan on keeping this short and sweet, I can't wait to see what happens. :D

-Lariant

Oww so thats why everyone believes Jenna is the most awesome cat like girl in the entire world.. damn! Ill hope Zelda saves Link in time or that thing is going to do something very awful and nasty ... god I wont forget that ceremony in my entire life.

This is awesome! Having her source of power as her eyes is a great idea. More!

-Leila

Just a heads up, chapter 2 is working now. :)

This is pretty darn funny. As a heads-up, your second chapter isn't working (to me, anyway).

When I read "My Inner Life" I found it HILARIOUS.
And now you've made a parody. Why the heck are you so freaking awesome?
Every time there was a reference to the original fic, I burst out laughing. Oh god
THANK YOU QUEENIE. THANK YOU