This was really good! I cannot wait to read more. Haha, I would love to see Les Miz in London,*sigh* Anyway, I hope to read more!

Hi, so far the story seems really promising and I can't wait for you to update. I loved your description of the little brother. I could really see him for me, and I love the main characters personality. Probably because it reminds meof my own *flushes*
I've only got two complains. First then it was an etremely short chapter. Won't the others be longer. You write really well, but it would be nice with a chapter on a couple of thousands words. Or maybe it was just this first one that was short?
Secondly then I'd like a description of how Jane looks. She is the main character after all and it's annoying not to have a picture of her in my head as I read the story.
Looking forward to the update!

Good start! Can't wait to see what happens next!