Update! Great story! ZBEST STORY EVER!

Can I ask you a SERIOUS question? Does James actually love Jasmine ir he just thinks he does?

AHHHH, so in the second preview, Little Creek DIDN'T truly hate her, he was trying to MAKE her hate him so she could LEAVE instead of being PUNISHED... am I getting it right? Of course I am... am I? ._.
Oh, well, AWESOME chapter, twas amazing, as always! :D :D :D The intimate scene between AJ and LC... it was hot but also made me somewhat sad... because you have NO idea what my ex-boyfriend and I did, managing not to go too far! XDD But I'm OK now Eugh, got a crink in my neck, these white pages are blindin' me! XD

Aon pore Jazmin..

Good chapter! Update soon? Also, you need to add more 'horse fun' in here!

Wow, Jasmine had a spaz attack-WTF?

Dudette, doncha' think the whole 'I'm Jazzy and Imma kill you Anog Ite cus I'm angry' thing was a bit out of charecter?
-IHARTSPIRTHORSE

Kool!

Oh. My. Gosh. This chapter was by FAR the best one you have ever written. The way you wrote about the fight exceeded my highest expectations! I know I'm going to be teary eyed when Little Creek sends Jasmine away. I thought that the tribe was going to put her to death though, so I think her leaving is a better alternative. I wonder what Jasmine's father is going to say when she goes home. He will probably be overjoyed.

Thanks for clearing up everything in this chapter. It was fabulous! I feel so sad for Little Creek. He is torn between duty to his people and love. I wonder if the tribe hates Jasmine now... How is Little Creek gonna break the bad news to Jasmine. This is going to break her heart.

The queen of cliffhangers strikes again! :D I stand by what I said about you being the best author on fanfic! I thought you did a wonderful job of portraying every detail of the fight. It was so descriptive and intense that I felt like I was really there! I was completely SHOCKED when Jasmine tried to drown Anog Ite! I could go on for hours complimenting your chapter but I will keep the review short. I can't wait for your next chappie :)

Best chapter yet! This was awesome AJ! I looooooved the fight! It was everything I could have ever expected. I've been waiting to see who would win the fight since chapter 2 or something, and I was definitely not disappointed! Great work AJ! You are such a talented writer. Never stop writing!

Wonderful chapter, AJ! Definitely my favorite one so far! I wonder how Little Creek is going to send away Jasmine. Poor Jasmine. But it is really sweet how Little Creek is sending her away to protect her from the wrath of the tribe. At least he isn't sending her away because he is angry at her. :) Keep up the great work!

excelent story!

Well I'm happy that this chapter ended in a kinda happy way but Jasmine has to leave now :(