Awesome. You summed up the story with that many words and I could still understand what was happening. I read the series also. It's a great story right?

That was as good a poem as you said it would be but they were in ministary lands not ministry lands no flaws other then that you should be proud of what you did and of what you do in the future

Whoa. That packed a pretty powerful punch (no wonder you got a 100 . . .) I thought that was really beautiful!I love reading poems, but yours is the best one I've read so far! So keep up the good work! :)