I know it's over. But maybe you could at least write another story like this one?

This fic so beautiful and perfect. Even when at times I knew where you were going, it still touch me deeply. And what you did there with Taka... I really glad I read it all. Thanks for writing this incredible story.

this story was utterly amazing, i laughed, i cried, and smiled like an idiot on various occasions

No offense , but its Lev not lyev and if i had my way, i would put Yudskiy not Yudsky.

I love this story. It's beautiful.
Just bump the rating up one, please, K plus stories shouldn't have any swearing at all, and not the various sexual references. It's a very good story...but not good for nine year olds.

I loved this story! OMG! Looking forward to your next story!

I absolutely loved this story. One of the best I've read in a while. I loved how it was portrayed and how the brothers ended up bonding in the very end.

Great story! I absoultuly loved it! :)

WOW, this story's over? O.o Talk about emotional endings, geeeez. XD

I have to admit that I felt really sad when Mufasa was in teh cage and getting ready to leave. D: And that he will never actually meet his nephew who was named after him.

There were a few typos and obscure little inconsistencies (ie, the fact that two lions who are presumably in different hemispheres would hence see different stars, so the claim that they are looking at the same ones isn't entirely true), they were all very minor. I loved the last few paragraphs, and how you tied everything into one moral/theme. Scar's change of heart was unexpected, but well-done.

Alas, parting is such sweet sorrow! D: (I'm quoting Shakespeare again XD Ignore me). But I suppose I will see you again soon, at whichever work you decide to publish next. Until then, good luck and happy writing! :D

Twin (:

PS I read your PM, but still have to respond to it because I'm so lackadaisical/busy/scatterbrained/etc... Ah well, you probably aren't surprised. x.x

D: No! That was so sad! I just wanted to reach through the computer and give Scar a hug. :[ Especially how the pride only paid attention to Mufasa and not to him.

Anyways, I know I haven't reviewed in forever. I have a lot of stories/PMs to catch up on, as well as working on my own. But I finally sat down and read 6 chapters - just four more to go before I'm all caught up. :D

A few more words of note, pretty much just concerning your English (the story's fine as it is ;]). First, a mistake with your possessives which I saw once and is pretty much one of those annoying "easily confused words" a lot of people have trouble with [such as they're, their, there; too, to, two, etc.]. The word "it's" is a contraction of "it is", and, to avoid confusion, the possesive of "it" is "its" [note the lack of an apostrophe]. I believe I noticed that once, and couldn't help but point it out. There were also a few problems concerning reported questions, but I already mentioned this so I won't harangue you for it... it's tricky.

Well, to press the point again, I know it's been a while since I reviewed - sorry about that. x.x Glad to see that this has done so well. Since my last review you have already passed Trampled in faves. ;D Hehe, nice work. lol

Twin (:

Amazing! Bravo! Brava!
Wonderful finish. Happy ending for everyone (even the Breeder, who's surprisingly not dead). I'll stop bothering you with fan-girl cheering now.

Well I anticipated a great epilogue, and I'm not disappointed! That was truly an amazing piece of work! You may be not a professional writer, but you have talent that's for sure! I hope to continue to read some of your work!

Good luck, and thanks again for sharing your imagination

This is one of the most well-written and well-plotted stories I've ever read! I loved it!

The 29th chapter's beginning is the same as the 1st. O_O
Mind blown.

Awwwwwww so cute! love the ending soo happy best story ever bravo!