Hey... While reading this fic of yours.. Can you make me a story about elesis and zero? Its just that after doing some research abou GC i couldnt shake of the idea about elesis and zero.. How elesis said that the way zero fights is similar to elscuds way of fighting... I dont intend to bother you or something.. I just want to know what you think about the couple...i know youll do something great after witnessing your awesome writing skills, that also converted me into a rin and asin fan. XD please?

Oh darn it! This is the best version I've read of this chapter. Just by reading this I'm pretty sure you went on writing & re-writing for over a dozen times. How I envy your abilities to write stories with so many words... I seriously lack that ability sigh

Pretty curious as to how the others fare now and what Lire's condition is in, just a thought if Lire is this affected is Ryan in the same boat as well or is Lire doing something to herself that is making her so weak in such a short time?

Yew Updated! :D
...Yay...
Anyways...I Still encourage yew to update...:P
SO UPDATE :O -Is also curious about Lire-

You devious plenipotentiary, you. What's an elf gotta do with all that wangling?

Right now. Im begging you to Update QAQ. Upddaatteee...I Love the Story. So Keep Updating!

It seems that I'm very late this time. My computer was broken down so...

This chapter is a good beginning. The illusion before going into the castle and the dark portal are very Kaze'aze. She now is the true witch, not as useless as in game.

I'm waiting for the adventure and battles inside the witch's castle.

Once again, sorry for my lateness XD.

A good chapter as always and I love how Lass took charge here :O
I dont understand y u said we would think you were dead though...and naa you're not stupid for juggling three stories at once, if that were true then I'd be an idiot writing a fanfic for GC, about to write a fanfic for Fate/Stay Night all the while writing an original light novel...so...yeah...still, its as good as ever keep it up _

You're alive! This story really deserves more reviews. I mean, the multifarious author had written sixteen coruscating chapters. But as you will see this off, I shall stick around till the Fat Lady sings.

Sorry for being this late XD.

I love the moment when Arme and Ryan combined their strength to beat Gardosen, It's really amazing! I always love it when all of the members of Grand Chase unite to defeat their enemies.

Another things to wonder about... what did Kaze'aze do to Lass . ...?

Oh, I forgot, the fighting scene was very good, less conversation and more action. You're improving very quickly :D.

P/S: Always love your sense of humor (the first paragraph) )).

Wow what-
Ronan! ; A ; What's Kaze'aze done to you? ;m ;
Please, please update soon. It's so good!
At the starting of the chapter, I found a typo, which is that you put 'is' instead of 'his', but other than that, this chapter is amazing!

And now I am officially envying your abilities... OTL

Thanks for putting the scene with Ronan, that was great(though sad) yeah... that was a bit sadistic of me to be excited about him becoming Kaze'aze's tool again... XD

Better the adroit turtle than the atrocious rabbit. The quality of the story supersedes the quantity of updates. Don't gripe too much about your torpid additions; we understand you have a life to pursue.

I love your writing style, and I love what you wrote so far! -sigh- if only i could write as good as u, mine is like...fail x-x
anyway keep up the good work, its really great and about the fluff thing, its something that cant really be forced P
i look forward to reading the story if it updates by the time im out of the OR, still love the way u write 3

The part about Lire and Ryan is so fun. To me, they're always good friends like that.

I also like Amy and Jin. It's a little sad but romantic. The idea that Amy is the one who tells Jin first about love is interesting and, well, fair for Jin because he is always the first to confess.

It seems that Ryan always comes in the wrong time. It's still lucky that he hasn't died yet because of some sudden injury.

I can't believe that someone think you're a boy. The way you choose your words, the plot and the way you describe characters' feelings totally tell me that you're a girl, and I never doubt that. It's very funny that someone still don't realize that.

The plot's just getting stronger and stronger, with no sign of rotting into a rut of reiteration. Please do continue!