Oh gosh... This can't end well...

Hey I'd like to say, great story. Although I am rooting for trixie, if Mike left her while she was pregnant, then he's a ,... Well I am not putting that word in a review…

Man, that was close. So how're they going to defeat Oraculo? And how is the situation between Mike and Micky going to be resolved? And what about Davy's feelings for Peter? Is he ever going to tell him?

I was wondering if Davy would be able to use his powers. Of all of them his ability to freeze would be hard to not overcome the gas! I hope more will come soon!

Wow this is really cool. I love the Monkees and this is awesome.

You can't stop there! Poor Davy! How hurt is he? If Mike was so upset, he may have used more force than he intended! Please add more soon! Thank you for updating!

Really love this story! The plot is so original and Micky as a controlled robot is so damn cool! I love every bit of this please update soon! one of my favourites!