|Reviews for The Wayward Children|
| Guest 4/17/13 . chapter 50
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| MaddMatt90 3/5/13 . chapter 51
Can't wait for more! At first was kinda thrown off by the diclonious being an alien race, but I like how well it played into the story
| E J ect 2/1/13 . chapter 51
The story is really going fast now. I can't wait for the next chapter. I think the summary is a bit wrong though. Military "brats" invokes images of incredibly skilled and spoiled teens in military school, with military parents, too.
| E J ect 2/1/13 . chapter 50
What a mess. I bet there'll be rioting in the streets now.
| keithallen 2/1/13 . chapter 51
OK, to explain the 'Family tree" for those who have not read my previous fan fics
Kouta : married lucy, Yuka, and Nana (who was about to give birth) at Lady Hakata's insistence.
Nana bore her child, and named her Mariko - in honor of her 'Papa's" daughter.
Lucy bore Kanae - in honor of Kouta's sister
Yuka bore Kouta JR
Lucy bore Chika
Lady Himari got pregnant / Kouta married her
Mariko bore Chizu( DIane) named after Hisoka's mother who died the same day as Lady Himari bore Kyoko (Suzanne) That day, Nana also died.
Yuka died from a gun shot, Lady Himari rescued Yoko from her womb
SO: Mariko is Nana's child. Kanae and Chika are Lucy's children. Kyoko is Lady Himari's child, Kouta JR. and Yoko are Yuka's children.
Mayu (who still randomly appears) is married and has two children of her own.
And Nana (the violet haired woman) died of old age at 28 yrs.
| Novaprime12 1/31/13 . chapter 51
Um... This latest chapter (51) has me officially MindBlown.
Bill transforms into a Diclonious (Sect member) and he is mainly concerned about Disrespecting the Sect? If that happened to me I would be more worried about the freaking HORNS ON MY HEAD!
I think I lost all faith in Bill... And at first I thought the dream in the toy room was with his future daughter, but I kinda lost track of the chapter after awhile and may have skipped some stuff.
At least Lucy gets to kick some more butt in the Middle East. I really wanna see if there is anything important in Antarctica, cause that would be "Cool"
Yeah, bad joke...
I still love this story, just I have lost faith in Bill. And last chapter (50) that was brutal reading Bill think about Yuka's death.
And can somebody clarify The entire family tree of Kouta and his wives, cause I can't make any sense of it.
Can't wait till the next chapter!
| forgottencharacter 1/31/13 . chapter 51
well, that was ...unexpected.
| jalingion 1/20/13 . chapter 49
i like it alot keep et up
| forgottencharacter 1/4/13 . chapter 48
Our son is going to hell- LOL!
Looks likes Bills Skeletons are coming back for him!
| Novaprime12 1/4/13 . chapter 48
As I read chapter 48 I began to dislike the characters of bill's mom and dad.
But I feel as though that is needed in this story, and I love the fact that they don't listen to what he says.
But on a side note, I really do believe a certain Queen should help Bill explain what is going on to his parents, seeing as they are not believing a word he is saying.
| Novaprime12 1/1/13 . chapter 47
Am I really the only person that believe Sarah is still alive?
I really hope the author sees this, cause I would love to see Sarah not dead, she was a good character.
| perpetualfanboy 12/27/12 . chapter 46
Ah, now it's starting to turn into Independence Day...
Bring it on!
| Novaprime12 12/25/12 . chapter 45
I would love to see stuff on Yuka's death and more humor at Bill's expense from Chika.
| Humanglitter 12/24/12 . chapter 1
I love this story! I've been following it for a long time now and I am so happy that you update so often! It's so well written, and just plain amazing
| perpetualfanboy 12/19/12 . chapter 43
Yeah, the whole outer space thing kinda threw me, too, but I still want to know what happens next.
Oddly enough, I can see sort of a Darrin and Samantha Stevens thing developing with Bill and Chika with Lucy acting as a more deadly version of Endora.