Woo-hoo! That was awesome! Some seriously intense imagery, and I think you got Marty's character spot-on.

Very good story, really! I imagine the scene really easily, with Marty and the rain and the music.
It would be nice if you write others back to the future stories. :)

Great story! You should write more Back to the Future stuff! :)

OK I DIDN'T READ THE STORY BUT I GOT THE ALERT AND... ACEY YOUR ALIVE! I MISSED YOUZ *GLOMPS YOU* *LOOKS AT THE READERS* THIS NEVER HAPPENED!