Reviews for Changing My Past
MonkeyDLuffy1512 12/11/12 . chapter 17
great story, please update soon!
pinkus-pyon 12/1/12 . chapter 17
I like you fic XD esperare con ganas el nex chapter :)
Zozosisi159 11/15/12 . chapter 16
Yay! Lambo is here! And his ego is bigger than in the original!
Tiger723 11/4/12 . chapter 17
Awwwww! Tsuna is sooooo cute! XD
I'm super glad that everyone is making it up to him since he didn't kill just to kill.
Ushould have reborn and isshan have a short chapter and have them go back to the past too. U said earlier tht they insulted and ignored tsuna so they should feel guilty even if only a little.
Love ur stories, I jut read them all! Waiting on chapters for all of them.
mikan27lover 10/4/12 . chapter 17
Please continue to molest tsuna, giotto *holding a camera*.. The writing stlye in the first part of this chapter is good.. But it still had a lot of room to improve..
mikan27lover 10/4/12 . chapter 16
*choke* Rumor.. Princess..?!.. Btw most of the later chapter feel kind of crackish and random
mikan27lover 10/4/12 . chapter 15
No one there to see giotto so they dodge the bomb.. only to had it explode later (it like a time bomb really.. The chaos that waiting to happen)
mikan27lover 10/4/12 . chapter 14
Oh dear the chaos that will come after.. It is just me or this story are start to sound like a crack stories?
mikan27lover 10/4/12 . chapter 13
Well sky arcobaleno can see a little into future in exchange for they short life span if I remember correctly.. This chapter feel kida rush..
mikan27lover 10/4/12 . chapter 12
If only with a bit more detail hibari-san scene would be perfect.. I especially like 'ah.. It raining..' scene.. On a sidenote kusakabe-san call hibari 'kyo-san' not 'kyoya'
mikan27lover 10/4/12 . chapter 11
When these slow poke gonna realize that this is not paralell world and everyone come from future..?. It it just me or this chapter are EXTREMELY short..
mikan27lover 10/4/12 . chapter 10
Huh? When did they had time to go on a date? *wide eyes look*
mikan27lover 10/4/12 . chapter 9
Poor deamon more work than other (He had two mist guardian to look after) I still laughing at the pineapple part
mikan27lover 10/4/12 . chapter 8
I broked down crying in laughter at mukuro.. Once I see the pineapple demon part and the fact that when I see deamon and mukuro in the same page my brain gave me an image of those two laugh they signature laugh in an attemp to find out whose laugh is cooler (creepier)
mikan27lover 10/4/12 . chapter 7
When are they gonna realize all of them come from future *sweatdrop*.. Yeah your writing stlye really improve but the flashback could be a bit more sweeter so gokudera-kun regret and bitterness will make more powerful impact on the reader.. Umm like " 'Juudaime!' tsuna look up from where he was sitting in the vongola garden to see his right-hand man looking ruffle and dirty holding a pot of some flower while running full speed toward where he's sitting, once the silvette infront of his beloved boss he shoved the pot to his boss eagerly 'look isn't it beautiful? It suit you perfectly juudaime!' and tsuna realized the flower in the pot is a roses an orange roses to be precise.. The soft orange color almost make the roses look like it glowing gently.. warm and soft like a sky flame.. under the bright sunlight 'It so beautiful..' the brunette said in a breathless voice 'Thank you gokudera-kun' tsuna's smile sweetly as he look up at his strom guardian a light reflect on warm honey brown orbs giving it a gentle glows while a breeze gently caress his soft chocolate brown hair.. In that moment gokudera forgot how to breath 'yeah.. Really..beautiful..' the silvette whisper quietly, 'Wha-?! Gokudera-kun you're arms is bleeding! Why don't you check in your injuries first?!' gokudera snap back to reality as the smaller man gently took his injuries arms 'It ok juudaime it just a scatch.. Beside More importantly I want to give the roses to juudaime first!' The half italian said earnestly, 'but you're important to me too gokudera-kun..' tsuna said quietly as he look up from wiping the blood off gokudera's injuries 'I don't want to see you got hurt.. it make me afraid I lost you someday' soft brown eyes look at surprise forest green before the silvette huff and declair proudly 'as you right hand man.. I can promise you I always be by your side juudaime!' The decimo look surprise before the surprise melt into a radiant smile as his eyes glow with pure happiness 'thank you..! Gokudera-kun'.."
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