|Reviews for The Morbid, The Merrier|
| Blue-Inked Frost 10/22/12 . chapter 20
Heh, I liked Imoen and the cream cake - and Renal's misadventures with Alice. Very nice! :)
| Late to the Party 9/30/12 . chapter 10
[…]"Are we there yet?[…]
Your descriptions are really very pretty. I especially like your nature-y bits. The cardboard cut out was funny ).
| Late to the Party 9/30/12 . chapter 9
"Indeed." – fourth line down; brilliant!
"Truly, do I look like some petty thief?"
Also brilliant. I like the emphasis on ‘petty’.
Late fifth husband, hah! Dealing with a cuckoo? That made me grin.
[…]the half-elven assassin was a very friendly lass, and indeed, close friends with him and just about everyone else.[…]
Except Ano. Heh.
[…]Maybe the day wasn't written in the red ink, afterall.[…]
If only… in Ano’s “ink”…
| Late to the Party 9/30/12 . chapter 8
Anomen doing laundry is very apt. Indeed, one might say it was just. However… can he be trusted to get it right?
[…]Anomen took out the frilly apron[…]
Pink, I presume? ;p. It had to be Imoen’s doing!
[…]He was in the dark[…]
Isn’t he always?
Good chapter ).
| Late to the Party 9/30/12 . chapter 7
[…]Is she much prettier[…]
XD! Very nice.
"Yes, but does she has bigger-"
"Our old man was a bloody god."
In more ways than one…
She liked the way it felt under her fingertips and the pretty pictures that flickered through her mind when she rubbed it, reminding her of blazing bonfires they held on Shieldmeet back home. Already she made a small discovery - the ring made her invisible when worn on finger, much like the one she owned before.
And this. This was hilarious. Preciously so ;).
Well done. Another amusing chapter.
| Late to the Party 9/30/12 . chapter 6
Poor, stupid Anomen…
| Late to the Party 9/30/12 . chapter 5
I like all the cursing; very creative. Wonderful atmosphere.
| Late to the Party 9/30/12 . chapter 4
Poor Renal. Very fun though! How do you come up with it all?
| Late to the Party 9/30/12 . chapter 3
That left me hanging!
I want to see more – good thing there’s the next chapter posted! Nice descriptions.
| Late to the Party 9/30/12 . chapter 2
Anomen’s blindness is most amusing. And his own strife and self loathing. p. “Tongue sticking witch”? Really Ano? The rumours are fun too. And bad Ano, kicking the dog! I love some of your lines here. The entire chapter is edged wonderfully.
| Late to the Party 9/30/12 . chapter 1
I re-read this, and as it did the first time, it amused me greatly. The first part about the ‘potion’ – it could apply to her weight given the sentence before, but it’s about her having a… well, as you say, a free pass. And what a nice young lad… ;p.
The second part was about Anomen. Took her a while to figure him out. She had only… :P. The obvious. Poor Ano, who likes dancing, flowers and fashion so very much *snicker*.
I also like your “the more, the merrier” – in the text. Very good. Also, good on details and such.
Onto chapter two.
| Blue-Inked Frost 9/3/12 . chapter 18
Alice is a creepy child. I liked the chapter; some nice description of the strange environment there, and Renal was appropriately creeped out and rather scared. :)
| Blue-Inked Frost 8/28/12 . chapter 16
Heh, that rabbit is very entertaining. I enjoyed Anomen's misfortunes here! :)
| Blue-Inked Frost 8/20/12 . chapter 15
Alice in Wonderland is quite scary. :) I liked the surreal world of this chapter!
| Blue-Inked Frost 8/13/12 . chapter 14
The killer rabbit is fascinating! I like the way you've fleshed it out as a character and made it amusingly creepy. I also enjoyed reading about Renal's misfortunes, and the interplay between Millara and Imoen. It was great to see an update of this story; I enjoyed reading it. :) I like the overall lighthearted mood. (Too bad Xzar isn't in this fic, with the killer rabbit and all! XD But I'm enjoying the story as is.)