A fun alternative story. Very well written and the humorous touches were quite interesting and gave me a good chuckle. Hope to see more of your stuff in future.

hee, really liked this! Worked really well, I liked Sophie and I loved the outsider POV on Robbie and James

Brilliant! :)

Great idea for a fic! I enjoyed it. I love seeing the characters we know from the outside.

I thought this was a Lewis fic - so far all I'm seeing is an apparent Mary Sue character. Also, some spaces between paragraphs would make it easier to read.

A clever story. Poor Sophie! But she really should have let Hooper fill her in...