|Reviews for Captives|
| BewilderedFemale 12/1/12 . chapter 13
OMG.. Dove bar is going to be ok right? You're not going to O.O
| BewilderedFemale 12/1/12 . chapter 12
OMG! Dove bar ate bambi! what... Southern! You're just gonna stand around and let this happen?! So Anne and Ba'el eat him in the next chapter cause he's a chocolate bar right?
| BewilderedFemale 12/1/12 . chapter 11
So Ba'el is getting married and she finally got over Wharf; I'm actually really happy for her as well especially since I'm sure she'd feel left out with Anne having married Dove bar, Dove bar I bet is just like Bochra isn't he.. he is isn't he HAH!
I pictured Ba'el and Toq banging their hands together against the table going: "Tonight we feast, feast on kill p'tah!"
Suddenly, Letant's little face comes out of nowhere asking: "Can I come to the feast too?"
| BewilderedFemale 12/1/12 . chapter 10
For some reason I thought this story had ended; guess not!
You know what that means though... more reviews ;-)
| thyme2read 11/20/12 . chapter 16
I love this story! My favorite part of this ch. was the trench digging scene.
| Just a Crazy-Man 11/20/12 . chapter 16
| Jungle native 11/7/12 . chapter 15
Marabunta is coming! AAAAAHHHHHH!
| Tribal Graces 11/5/12 . chapter 15
At last we find out what's in the jungle! I was expecting alien monsters, or maybe some sort of invasion force, but an alien killer ant swarm is even creepier. I like the plot twists, as well as the juxtoposition of the dramatic main plot against the comic Eviess & H'dean subplot.
| thyme2read 11/5/12 . chapter 15
Awesome! I laughed out loud at Eviess's thoughts, esp. this part:
She had never really listened to his babbling while on patrol, because she had always assumed it was more of the same nonsense he uttered audibly.
Aaaahhh! A bunch of jungle ants coming to eat them up! Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
| njmrtl 11/5/12 . chapter 15
I am SO glad you didn't end the story (as intended) when you first brought Toq back. It's getting really exciting!
| thyme2read 11/5/12 . chapter 14
I like how you wrote this chapter from Toq's point of view, especially how he was worried about not looking weak in front of his father-in-law. :)
I also loved how H'dean got so distracted by the girls' gossip that he ran into the column! Great chapter, cuz!
| 0afan0 11/4/12 . chapter 15
Romance and chills! Not bad. I like the part where she punches him. The soldier ants are coming. This should be fun.
| codedriver 11/4/12 . chapter 15
wow, soldier ants can be brutal. Interesting foe for your group and how will the win.
| Just a Crazy-Man 11/4/12 . chapter 15
More please. :) I love this story can't get enough. :)
| 0afan0 10/31/12 . chapter 14
I got really caught up in the story. I would have run into the column like H'dean. I think that was a great moment. I wonder if they'll get together? What is in the jungle? Lions, and tigers, and bears, oh my!