| Reviews for Harry Potter and Death's Bargain |
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DarkHeart81 5/13/13 . chapter 7Lol... Loved how Harry just summoned the egg. |
Pamela St Vines 5/10/13 . chapter 6I'm enjoying your story. It's well paced, well written and just plain fun to read. Your take on Snape's "friendship" with Lily is interesting (and unique in my experience), and I love Harry sending Dumbledore off after the ring to get him out of the way. Thank you.. |
bpvreader 5/9/13 . chapter 7Great story, THANKS for sharing! Please continue this story, Please do something about Luna, Harry and Hermione would not allow the bulling to continue, as they now know about it having come back in time. |
Morriganscrow 5/7/13 . chapter 7 Other than a few flip-floppy tenses, that was a fun chapter. I really do enjoy Harry bullying Dumblemort. |
HarryHermioneEdwardBella 5/4/13 . chapter 7nice chapter |
Kehlen 5/4/13 . chapter 1I did enjoy the first chapter. Nice spin of the challenge. (By the way, is there a list of stories based on it somewhere? I've stumbled over half a dozen I think, and most are fun to read, though many never go far.) |
sunsethill 5/4/13 . chapter 7Great job and an exciting chapter. Even though it had been a while, this story has enough unique elements that I had no trouble getting back into the flow. You also did enough of a recap to jog my memory without it feeling like a recap. I loved the detail about Cedric using up some of his lives during the tasks and Harry wanting to make sure that he didn't actually need them this time around. The explanation for why the judges would not think about anti-summoning charms also makes more sense than usual in a story like this. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
Red Phoenix Dragon 5/4/13 . chapter 7A good chapter dealing with Dumbledore getting the stone and wand but giving Dumbledore time to decide just gives him time to plan his own greater good and to blacken Harry's name. Even attack Hermione or her parents. He should have made Dumbledore make an unbreakable vow not to harm Harry or his family including Sirius. Now Dumbledore has time to gather his order and send Molly after him. Interesting idea of Harry feeling time rewound when Dumbledore died again. Ronald will be so upset that Harry made it look so easy with the first task. Even Ronald could have done that. Will the headmasters portraits tell Dumbledore that Harry obliviate him? Thanks for sharing your story. Please update soon. |
teedub 5/3/13 . chapter 7i like the concept of a pissed off death angel and look forward to more of this story. i suspect that dumbles and snape won't be around by the yule ball. |
Mobozo 5/3/13 . chapter 7Good story. I'm enjoying it very much. I'm looking forward to reading more. |
Cassandra30 5/3/13 . chapter 7Excellent! Go, Harry! |
Cassandra30 5/3/13 . chapter 6Wicked! No Severus didn't deserve what happened to him as a boy. It simply made him into what he is today or rather his reaction to it did. Pity. |
Penny is wise 5/3/13 . chapter 7Awesome chapter. |
ILoveGeorgeEads 5/3/13 . chapter 7I loved loved was great. I can't wait for more. |
gonekrazy3000 5/3/13 . chapter 7This is such an amazing story. And an excellent chapter to boot. Part of me wished that Harry DID make the rude hand gesture. Looking forward to the next chapter :) |