| Reviews for limbo |
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A Midsummer 5/9/13 . chapter 1 Too bad pretty boy got his girlfriend in the line between the living and the dead. Not exactly the best meeting place to fall in love. Still, if there was one thing I've learn about this genre is that either one dies or both. The first one who dies will always be the girl. Sakura...she's pretty lively, isn't she? I liked the little tidbit with Naruto and Itachi of course even if the story of those two brothers just don't end up happy no matter the universe. |
it would be reyna 4/28/13 . chapter 1ohmylord. this is gah. it's like... tfios with the hold augustus-hazel drama except naruto and ugh so heartbreaking |
Chiere 4/27/13 . chapter 1Sasuke was imagining that? Or maybe she visited him while he was in the hospital? Whatever it was, this story was heartbreaking. You're a great writer, honestly. That last line made me fangirl and smile and like there was an abundance of feels right there. |
Symphony's Feather 3/16/13 . chapter 1This is wonderful. I'm serious. This is so unique-it's unlike anything I've ever read before. Amazing. |
dyingimmortal 2/17/13 . chapter 1This was beautiful and sad. I liked it very much. |
Dragonfly 2/4/13 . chapter 1 Beautiful. It brought tears to my eyes. |
a cute person 1/27/13 . chapter 1 Ssooooo sad! :'[ but its a good story |
oOomunchkinzoOo 12/29/12 . chapter 1i'm not really good with vocabulary and so to understanding deeps thoughts, but somehow managed to understand this, and I really loved it plain and simple story. |
FoamBanana 12/16/12 . chapter 1Oh my god, this was so sweet. You should make a sequel! Keep on writing |
neon kun 11/9/12 . chapter 1it had a very nice premise and i liked how you wrapped it up. the scene where she told him they're leaving from purgatory could have been improved though. it was a climactic scene but it didn't feel like it and it didn't make the heart pound as much as it should have. other than that, it was all good. nice work. |
floating on clouds above 10/23/12 . chapter 1Lovely story! :) |
AdotD 10/14/12 . chapter 1Wow. Nicely written. And very creative. Thanks! |
Lucy4p130 9/30/12 . chapter 1I just...wow, I literally have no words. I love this, te bittersweet ending and just the FEEL of te story. Ur an awesome writer 8) I also like how you sequence this story and the others I've read-quick and precise but not too confusing or blunt. |
Heartless Breaker 9/8/12 . chapter 1Oh gosh, this made me cry. T.T |
SkeleTonQueeN06 8/21/12 . chapter 1tebane.. i hate it when the two main characters in a story didn't get together in the end.. but i think yours was an exception.. *wink**wink* |