|Reviews for Dusk Is A Derivative Of Dawn|
| Guest 12/12/12 . chapter 3
The story is really fantastic. Please write a new chapter soon!
| Guest 11/11/12 . chapter 3
Oh god, I lost it when Adeline put the blush on Elvynne's cheeks. "There were two pink dots on my cheeks. How odd."
Love this fic so far! I don't usually review but I will today. Pleasse update.
| Guest 10/10/12 . chapter 3
I really like this story. Main character is really great. Please update soon!
| snkyhkynen 9/16/12 . chapter 3
I love this story positively! It is awesome so far
| radio-ga-ga 8/15/12 . chapter 2
This is really good. I really hope you continue this story, because it's original compared to most stories on here. Update soon, por favor! :)
| Willy Wonka Fan 8/5/12 . chapter 2
Love it! I was laughing practically the entire first chapter... Elvynne's sister is such a stalker! ;)
| meridyan 8/3/12 . chapter 2
Very funny, and one of the best wonka fanfics on here. Usually, all these stories have the main girl describing herself as beautiful, Its refreshing to read a story told in a more modest fashion. For some reason it reminds me of Marceline and Bubblegum Princess, my apologies if you take offence to that!