Very nice!

Not bad, I could give a few pointers if you wanted, ;) But you write a pretty good story. There's a few jokes I'm not sure if I got, but I've never seen the wizzard of oz movie, might have something to do with it... ;) Iolaus makes a good point, no teenager should be allowed to talk disrespectfully to their parent... ;) I wonder what Hercules will say when Iolaus tells him the full story. I'll try move on and read the other stories too.

Take care now, Elenhin

Dear Wynonarose:
Very nicely done. I had expected to see this become a crossover with Smallville, and I think that would have been a good choice, but this was a very satisfying read. thank you.

Nice story, wouldn't have minded more. ;) Nice with the modern world mixed into it, and a very good reason to send the lad there. They could use the help. I should wonder what Hercules would say about it if Iolaus told him about it though.

Kind regards, Elenhin

Nice job, Iolaus in our time, really funny, love the connection to the past a well.

Loved this story! Keep writing.