woaah! very nice!
i loved the the fact you used the movie: Fight CLub, and compared them with Tyler and MArla!! that was so cool!
i loved that movie, and the characters kinda fits on them ;)

Powerful in its insanity. Third time reading this, and I still tear up. Her single, stunted/broken/brief sentences really illustrate her state of mind - jumping from things to things until they settle back on her Mistuh J, as always.

The last line is good.

Very sentimental, or as sentimental as psychotic, deranged murderers can get.

I love the twistedness of your tales, it reflects my thoughts of HQ&J exactly.
yummy.

Dang, you have got talent! I can almost hear Harley's sing-song voice saying "Mistah J!" and "Puddin!" and everything elsewhen I read your stories...Dang, you should write for DC someday, girl, cause you have got talent!

*sniffle* Holy crap, that made me cry. I hope it was supposed to. o_o; Great work, ayhow. :D

This is very emotional...Great fic.