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Love it the way it is! Can't wait to read more!

This is all S3X S3X S3X Nothing interesting! This is a horrable story!

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You are doing great! Please keep it in katniss's prospective. I think it sounds better that was. The love scenes that you write are very good, so keep doing what you are doing. I can't wait to read the next chapter. (:

I think it should switch back and forth between the two perspectives and more baby making and even more dominant peeta

more baby-making. i love how dominant Peeta is but if u continue writing this the nect chapter Peeta should be the submissive one and Katniss the dominant one

This story is good I love bold peeta although I feel that we should have more of a story delema like u should have created conflict with gale and yeah

Hi, I love your stories! I thought I would comment, because I've been totally captured by your writing. I think putting it in Peeta's perspective would be great, something different and an interesting side to it. I love all your love scenes, and myself, I like the baby making...I like how Peeta is dominant too. I just wanted to thank you for writing this and keep up the good work!

i think you should keep it how it is and maybe add a few of peeta's pov's

Love it though XXXX!

Also I forgot to add that I'm liking the dominance in Peeta, it doesn't make him ooc at all as there are moments were he does become shy and blushes which is really cute. I also like your portrayal of Katniss, she is true to the Katniss from Suzanne Collins world as she's passionate yet shy about nudity and yet you've managed to put your own flare to her, so I'm impressed and again excited to see how the next chapter plays out.

I'm loving this so much! I'm excited to see what Katniss does for pay back; my guess is that she'll tease him with that black lingerie- that i don't recall her wearing... Sure I think the next chapter would be nice in his pov, we'll get to see how her payback effects him! Plus I don't think you are doing too many love scenes- they are young and at the beginning of their marriage still, it's very logical and fitting to the situation that they can hardly control themselves as Katniss has only just discovered her love for him and Peeta has been waiting all his life to show his love for her and for her to return it. Don't change how everything is playing out it's just right!
Sarah x
p.s Please update soon or I might throw myself under a bus.

I love this story! Please keep writing, your doing great!(:

I think there is too much sex but i love the way you write. It is different from Suzanne Collins but its still really good. Write more please! And I like it from katnisss point of view. If it would be from peetas point of view it would also be too much love things. I like how you bought cinna and prim back to life and you should somehow include finnick even though katniss wasn't in the quarter quell. Keep up the great work!

i think the story is great so far and as for the perspective i think either would be great however it might be better to switch it up and change it to peetas for the next chapter.