omg you're such a great writer! I've been glued to my phone screen the past few days reading this story. It's a really great continuation from the last guardian 33 I love how you depicted the events and you were simply painting images in my mind with your beautiful descriptions 3 I was so sad this story ended *sniffs* please continue writing and I will love you forever T.T awesome job!

there is no artemis/holly romance in the epilogue at all

HOLY CRAP. This should be book 9 in the series! Amazingly written, few grammatical mistakes, wonderfully plotted... whoever said that was right: this should be a nominee for the Orion Awards (whatever they are) and the winner. All in all, I would say that this is the second best (please don't take offense about the "second" part) FanFiction that I have ever read. Well done.

This story is AMAZING the additions develop the original ending so much and actually make it more entertaining. I have been glued to the screen of my phone, reading this FanFiction for a week and I absolutely love it!
In this chapter, I especially want to point out a small detail that I like; Butler doesn't immediately open his eyes the moment he regons consciousness. I've always wondered why people in movies and books insist on making it clear that they woken up que they have little or no idea what kind of trouble they are in. It's just seems illogical. Anyway, kudos for that and your awesome work :D I'm going to continue reading now :)

Wow, I can't believe how far this has come. I only recently got an opportunity to really get back into it, and what you've done is simply fantastic. As far as I'm concerned, this is how the series should have ended. You really drew out the amnesia part and made the most of it. I found the part with the four elements a particularly nice touch, and apropos to all of them. I was a little surprised to see Trouble not making it, but I started thinking about the 'Past' Koboi being the one behind the trap pretty early on, and it makes perfect sense. I mean, she would have to b up to something in all that time. This has to be one of my favorite Artemis Fowl stories, even though there's no real overt romance included. Of course, it's not really hard to read between the lines if one is so inclined to do so. All in all, this is truly a great story and something to be proud of.

Yesss. :D Now if only they were accidentally on speaker and everyone in the theatre heard them. *maniacal laughter*

*moans* Oh Arty! D:

AWWWW! That's all I can say. AWWWWWWWWWWW!

The nightmare was sooo heart wrenching. :( I had to go search up a fitting sad song before I read the rest.

Yaaay. Good job Butler, have a little faith. :)) And awww, Foaly. Poor Holly. ;_;

*sniffle* its over...

Isn't it lucky that great minds think alike, eh?
And, wow, you're such a great writer!
Keep it up!

This is sooo emotional!

omg! i love ur writing so much! can u write a really long one so i can read it?

That is so funny! Can't wait for the epilouge!