'Surrounded by the scattered shards of his fury'
Aw man, that's beautiful :p
Loving this story, hopefully they all get this worked out between them!

And so, our heroes will either end up killing each other, or Caroline/GLADOS will mess everything up. I have a feeling that Sniper will not be trusted or looked at the same ever again when his secret comes out.

HEY LOOKIT DAT!

THE STORY WENT FROM GAY TO GREAT AGAIN :D

So if Miss Pauling is from Latin America, why is she white?

Now I'm convinced the GLaDOS is going to play dead, and Engie and Pauling are going to write Sniper off as crazy AND a prick...and then it will all go downhill from there. Well, more-so than it already has. Interesting cameo from the BLU Spy! That's what I like about your work-there's always this air of mystery, and just when you think you have everything sorted out, BAM! You hit us again.
Still feeling bad for Sniper, even if he deserves his balls blown off at this point.
Cheers!
Chaos

Oh man. I wonder if GLaDoS is going to let them get close enough to see her! She must have SOME turrets still in working order!

Keep writing.

Little secret's out, then. Serves him right.

also, for now on, to make sure no bastard here pretends to be me, im using a real account

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inbred reindeer is NOT pleased

not at all -.-

Oh god, I started reading this when there were only 10 chapters out but I saw where it was going immediately. Every new chapter has efficiently broken my heart a little more.

This is absolutely wonderful, and I will read it until the end, crying the whole time.

You know, considering the types of plot twists you've been putting into this story, I would have expected it to kind of "jump the shark." The nature of the story abruptly changed in just one or two chapters, and it would be really easy for it to go off the rails. But you're handling it really well. Nothing is out of character, and the storyline right now is like watching a train crash in slow motion. It obviously can't end well. And Caroline makes me want to take a shower.

At this point, I'm wondering if Sniper's feelings for Engie are really genuine; it seems like he wants to be accepted and desired more than he wants Engie specifically.

you better do shit for my benefit because I have such a case of unwarranted self importance that I think some pushy reviews from me will make everyone cower in fear and do whatever I want also I am a homosexual

neener neener neener

i command you to hurry up

i will make fun of this comment and threaten to stop reading it as much as i want good sir -.-