This was beautifully written, but incredibly sad.
Now I have to go read something happy to cheer myself up
Keep up the wonderful work

Holy Jesus.

That is some heavy cream right there.

I... I adore this. This is so heartbreakingly sad, but so perfect! Please keep this up!

Very beautifully written. And sometimes read like a sorrowful poem, which fits greatly with the atmosphere of the story.
It touched upon some dark themes that, though unfit for children's entertainment, are quite insightful of its implications. The sad thing is the damage is already done the moment of the accident and when Francoeur first saw light. Now, it is inhuman either way to let him return to his original insignificant body or to let him keep his new self.
Because sometimes humanity is more a curse than a blessing.

Very well-done, but I fear for the almost inevitable ending.

Your choice of words hurts my tiny, simple brain. They were most unnecessary.

Very verbose, but not in a negative way. Very refreshing, and I am excited to see where this leads.