Continue please I really like this story!

I see you haven't updated in a while, but I'm hoping you will soon 'cause this story is really good and I wanna see what happens next :) I like the little taste of fluff between Zero and Kain at the end and it honestly didn't seem random or awkward at all. You made it work :) I can't wait to see hat awaits these two, so please update soon :3

Please continue

this is good, I hope you update soon

oh my god. that was so cute! and i cant wait for more...

This is by far your best chapter. I loved every part of it and I look forward to the next. Your writing is getting better with each chapter. Keep up the good work!

loved this chappie

I feel like there was a lot missing from this chapter... I wish we could have read what exactly Kain and Zero said.

they need to hurry up and confess there love

so far this is gooood

I think this story is not bad! Want to read more

Good portrayal of Zero's hatred for Kaname, you also handled him needing Kaname well which isn't easy to master.

A little slip with Kain's side. You had a paragraph of first person right at the point change. No big deal, just wanted to point that out.

I have to admit that I really liked Kain not understanding his anger and jealousy when he smelled Kaname's blood on Zero, it opens up a lot of possibilities for this Yaoi.

Hope to see an update soon.

I've been a big fan of the kainXzero pairing ever since I picked up VK and I'm very intrigued by your story. Your characterization is good and promises more good things to come. I look forward to more updates.