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| CII 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abuseDude, I just realized who you are. You're the guy who wrote this. And I doth my hat to you. This is a very good story. I'm sure you've seen my two different Bahamut images on my site. Spirits was dedicated to this story. Just thought I'd let you know that. And if you like the Bahamut Zero image too, great. |
| Setra Kakan 2007-01-16 ch 25, | abuseToo sleepy to write a good review, I will just say it was a good story. |
| Setra Kakan 2007-01-16 ch 5, | abuseTwo things 1. The Answer is 52 you fool! I found that incredibly funny for some reason 2. Cecil + Female = huh? o.O |
| Setra Kakan 2007-01-16 ch 3, | abuseNow I get it.. Glenn seems a little too... Familier with Bahamut, that is how he seems off. It makes him harder to grow as a character... Regardless this story has piqued my interest even moreso. If I stop reviewing I decided the story was so interesting I couldn't wait to review so I kept on reading. |
| Setra Kakan 2007-01-16 ch 2, | abuseInteresting view on the way in which the ... G.Fs, I guess, come into being. Shiva seems to be much different than the 'Ice Queen' personality most people use for her, thus far it could be a good thing. Though Glenn feels a bit out of place, somehow, I can't pinpoint it... |
| Setra Kakan 2007-01-16 ch 1, | abuseHmm so far this is someone interesting, though the abundance of Author-Made characters is somewhat irritating. As Glenn said it seems to be moving on a bit quickly, I think I'll read on to see how it ends up. Ps. You authored a ton of Dragon Stories, wow, you must like dragons a lot. I do too, especially Bahamut. Even if he was originally a Fish. |
| Fayt Leingod 2006-09-05 ch 25, anon. | abuseYeah, that's right, another review from me in such a short amount of time.:P Night...you just made me a Bahamut fan.^_^ It would've been so nice if summons actually played a major role in this game series' storyline. But anyway...GREAT FIC! And Knights of the Round sounds like a really cool attack! |
| aquakyuubi 2006-04-14 ch 25, | abuseGreat story i hope you do another like it. |
| Shadow of Chaos 2005-08-03 ch 25, anon. | abuseAs a major lover of all things Draconic and a huge fan of Final Fantasy I have one thing to say. AWESOME! This was one of the best Fanfictions I have ever read! I hope that you make a sequel. One last thing I must say, your portrayal of the the summoned creatures as indivduals was incredible, not many people could pull off giving depth to characters you hardly have any interaction with in the games. At best they just say a few words and give you a task in order to prove your worthy of summoning them. Final Fantasy 11 is the only game which gives them some character depth, and then only a few of them. Your story was begun well before that game came out, so your portayal was completely unique. I also loved how you managed to work the Heartless into the story. I wish I was as good at writing as you. |
| Skylamiat 2005-05-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseGeez, you use the < and > buttons better than the Animorphs fanfic writers do, and they use them all the time! I have a small comment. Aldrea is the name of one of the characters in the Animorphs series ((Aldrea-Iskillion-Falan)). |
| UltraBeing 2005-01-25 ch 4, | abuseAWESOME story! I love the humor, with Carbuncle's pranks. Thanks for reviewing my poem. I think you'll like what I do with Bahamut in "Torture from the Devil Woman: Ultimecia." Chapters 1-17 are up. My dark FF8 piece. I'm just getting back to finishing up chapter 18 after several days of being occupied. I also have an online roleplay community on Final Fantasy based, involving numbers 7 to X-2. Interested? Let me know. I think it'd be awesome if you could join. Original characters, FF based, good guy or villain, may be allowed. :) Oh, and my email is also my MSN addy, so if you have MSN, I'd add ya! You are a great writer. I LOVE this story. It's very funny in some ways too. I shall read more later, but I got other fics to catch up with now. |
| Drache53 2004-07-06 ch 25, | abuseWow.. I've been wanting to read this for a while.. I think you were on chapter 21 when I read the first few paragraphs, but I got bogged down in my own FF fanfic and didn't have time to read it all.. But I finally read it all and I must say.. GREATNESS! I like how you incorporated some of my favorite anime thingies in there(the sweat drop and twirly eyes) and how Glenn and Bahamut were constantly bickering. I like the way you incorporated all the GFs I knew about and even some I've only heard of in there. You even had all the Bahamuts in there(8, 10, Neo, and Zero) and upgraded the other GFs. Finally I LOVE the ending, really funny. Well, like I said great story and I'm really glad I took a break from my story to read yours. Well.. Um.. I guess that's it.. Carpe Diem! |
| Enigma of Despair 2004-06-29 ch 25, | abuseEncore! Or better yet, a follow-up (follow-up, sequal, part 2, etc. whatever you want to call it). You are truelly a gifted writer, though I wish 'Big V' was incorperatted more than just a little organ theme that half the people who read this probably don't even know... I wonder if... ah nevermind, already tried that. |
| The Supreme Dragon Knight 2004-06-11 ch 25, | abuseThis was an Awesome Story! Loved it! I read it from beginning to end! |
| Sturmblut 2004-06-10 ch 25, | abuseWell, finalley it´s over. It was a great story and I really enjoy it from the begining to the end! Do you plan a sequell? |