Yeepe! Keniko and Yulice rule in my mind! Ehe, okay... now! Cats and Moles, Wolves and Rabbits rock! Other pairings as well! You are a great writer!

Wow, this one has a great plot and everything you've out done yourself with Keniko fics all the way, you go on with your bad self . Terrific job!

Definitely one of my fave stories!

Write another Damn chapter Jackass.

Just finished the sequel, Unwanted Betrayal, and I've found this one of the best in both portraying the game- even down to the Rage Moves! As for the characters themselves, I can't believe that this is actually a fan fic.. You could make your own transition storyline for BRII to BRIII with this- kinda like the Legacy of Kain series... Blood Omen, then Soul Reaver... so they double back and make the sequel Soul Reaver 2, then come up with Blood Omen 2. Anyways, this is staggeringly wonderful.. I've not met an equal. I'm really impressed, I'm gonna read the others- keep writing and I'll continue trying my best to get out my own- hope you like them when I finish.

-Lynx Klaw

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i think this is my favorite so far :) keep em coming!

sob...this story really touched my heart...Kenji and Uriko are so sweet! Those two are just sooo right for each other! Keep writting k?

Another fantastic story with Uriko and Kenji. Very descriptive, and a great ending.

i love the ending its really sweet!and the stories cool

cool scenes really good job on describing the moves

ur really working on that suspense thing huh? well its would be eager to find out what happened next!

i liked it and it keeps u in suspense cuz of the way theyre so distant and they wont just tell eachother already. but its good to make the readers keep reading

Great fantastic sequal chisti. Very very very good, nice ending

Part IV (conclusion)- A great ending to another great fic. Nice, calm ending. No more intrusion from those clones or any others...everything turned out great...for now...Good job. _

It'll be cool to see what you do after BRIII comes out on the 26th of this month.

Part 3- What a comeback! More cool moves! Go Kenji! Go Uriko! Errrrrrrrr...anyway, glad to see that Uriko's OK _. Another great fight sequence. Can't wait to see how the rest of this saga plays out...