| Reviews for Harry Potter: Wizard Avenger |
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little-bast 12/18/12 . chapter 2Interesting Start...Keep the chapters coming! I can't wait for Dmbledore to try something... Who is Harry's new guardian/ parent? Is Loki part of Harry's family... will he be angry at the wizarding world? Looking forward to your next chapter... Can't wait to see what you have planned... Hoping for and update soon... |
Elfwyn 9/20/12 . chapter 2The first chapter was good and showed promise for a unique storyline. This chapter had a few problems. How is it that they know what Dumbledore planned? (Canon plotline) This needs to be explained to make the story creditable. As well why doesn't Harry just "accidentally" break his Holly wand if this upsets their plans? As well, an obvious plot hole is that if Harry has been learning magic he should have already had his own wand and therefore not needed to buy a new one from Ollivander's. The story would be less confusing if you just went with whatever is going to be the new unique storyline and forget the what-was-to-be stuff. Everyone ready this already knows canon. |
naruchan84 9/12/12 . chapter 2cant wait for harrys life at hogwarts good luck hope the contract dumbles signed was magical enhanceted or something |
ceo55 9/11/12 . chapter 2Interesting story plot...will wait to see how it continues! |
anonimous 9/11/12 . chapter 2 good chapter, seeing that in some way harry is the son/nephew of the avengers they come to harry in case of problems and have a staff of magical lawyers to restrain dumbledore in case of overstepping his functions as headbastard (i know is master) or all migthy chief of the courts, parliament, etc... also a brazlet or hardened harry's skin to avoid harry's blood to be taken for any ritual eater by old dork or snake face (snape included) give him the strongest occlumance shields, legerimance or how its called to traspace occlumancy, make him a ach-mage, ultra-mage or what you like, but stronger than the lod man and the snake. see ya and please update soon |
elmoryakhan 8/30/12 . chapter 1Great story can't wait to read the next chapter. |
jvankessel 8/9/12 . chapter 1"Draco Malfoy continued to beret them" The Malfoy heir's reign of terror started when unsuspecting students were forced to wear an assortment of berets and hats. Things went downhill from there. |
Slicerness 8/8/12 . chapter 1looks like a good start. a little short, but this is an ideal place to end it, so that's not such a big deal. |
sffilk 8/5/12 . chapter 1 You need to continue this and take it to its ultimate conclusion. That said, please try to get chapters out as quickly as possible. |
Battosailover5 8/1/12 . chapter 1This sounds like a great idea for a story. Can't wait to see Harry take his revenge out on the wizarding world. |
dead feather 7/29/12 . chapter 1I'm not sure about this. By the name, I thought this might've something to do with the avengers but it wasn't marked in that category, nor did the summary say anything. So I was all... hmm, interesting. The history was new to see, I wish it had differed more from canon. With this new golden trio, I didn't really warm up to them filling Harry's shoes. And at the end the Avengers became part of the picture. I wondered why would they go along with this vendetta and what wrongs did the wizarding world commit to Harry? Sure, they left him with his nearest relatives but so would've muggle authorities done as well. So is it enough? |
Akira Stridder 7/29/12 . chapter 1lets see where this goes.. |
starboy454 7/25/12 . chapter 1look like a good start to your story |
mwinter1 7/25/12 . chapter 1Awaiting more. |