|Reviews for Love in Shades of Green and Gray|
| JOHNXgambit 5/19/13 . chapter 61
wisdom: brave get a stretcher happy blew a fuse. if this were an episode I picture BB driving a semi labeled proposal blindsiding raven backing up and doing a burnout on her. the beach scene was deep in a creepy I'll show u mine if I see yours kinda way
| Anbu-Nightfury 5/19/13 . chapter 61
I can't wait to read about the bachelor party! This chapter was awesome.
| JasonVUK 5/19/13 . chapter 61
Oooohhh so Raven shows that Demon side of her's to Gar. I wondered about that since you had her use it back on Tameran. Now I have a better idea of what it looks like. Damn I wish there were some pictures to get the true image of it.
And Gar _ SQUEEE! he proposed! Awesome!
And is Raven worried about the Male Strippers? or just the Male Titans? and Where have they gone? 8O
The questions build :P
| otaku03 5/19/13 . chapter 61
What have they done this time? Don't tell me you inspired yourself with Very Bad Trip...please!
I hope that the wedding will go through ... you should be ashamed of yourself, making us worry every single damn chapter! and to think i had calmed down until that last phrase! If you did something bad again, i will really hate you...
anyways great chapter, the bachelorette party sounds fun! i wonder if what the guys did was spy on them in in some weird way with superpowers or something?
hah...well...i'm looking forward to what happens next!
good lucl in your writing.
PS: you're killing me.
| Lover of A Good Story 5/19/13 . chapter 61
Changeling having a threesome with both Raven and Starfire sounds pretty good. I'm guessing the guys ain't there cause they were giving Changeling a bachelor party. Also nice to see Raven not give in and fuck one of the strippers to 'get back' at him for the episode with Starfire like I know alot of women would.
| Promises of Freedom 5/19/13 . chapter 61
Haha, I guess the men went out and had a bachelor party of their own!
| Dead Bones Sam 5/19/13 . chapter 61
Dude that was sweet! And the fact that the men were no where in sight can only mean one thing: BACHELOR PARTY! Keep these coming man you the bomb!
| Shadico 5/19/13 . chapter 61
Everyone was depressed from chapter 60 because it seems like she's given up and defeated. She doesn't know she can have kids because she thinks she's sterile, and then speaks as if she's already admitted defeat saying Gar WILL (not might) leave her in the future because of it. That's some depressing stuff.
This chapter was extremely amusing, and Rae's description of their sex life made me laugh heartily. You go Gar.
I'm still pulling for them having kids, even though it looks like you're trying to shatter that hope very hard right now, hah. I just think it would make for the ultimate icing on the cake for this story. Ah well, I can dream!
| Guest 5/19/13 . chapter 61
Let's see... yeah, I don't read too many comics (I don't even read TT!) so it's not surprising I didn't know that. I read... Usagi Yojimbo (back when they were still making it. I even have issues 1-2!), and Harley Quinn, when she had her own comic.
Er... I'm guessing the long-ago-written scene was the 'shape reveal' scene. I doubt it could be much else. :)
And I like the chapter quite a lot, but the first third or so seemed to almost gloss over too much. I get the Hive Five being 'not much' at this point, especially with Jinx on the 'good guys' side, but Slade is supposed to be 'The Big Bad'. /shrug
I also get how it would make the chapter/story tons longer to have a full battle, but I would have liked more personally (especially as, to my recollection, there hasn't been a big anti-Slade battle in Shades yet).
Anyway, again, great chapter, can't wait to see the last one or two. :)
| Charlizard777 5/18/13 . chapter 60
Best Fanfiction I've read in a very long time. Excellent!
But must it end here at chap. 60?
| Hairul The Nightrage Beast 5/17/13 . chapter 60
Ah Chemo, so you used him from Nightwing renegade arc during the infinite crisis saga era eh? Well played in including him my friend.
| mkell734 5/16/13 . chapter 60
First of all, I just want to mention that I read all 60 Chapters (less the alerts about lemons) in less than three days-time, and I am pleasantly pleased with the direction your story is moving toward. I might even go as far as to admit that I read several chapters during work (all the while keeping my peripheral vision on high alert as to not get caught and get my ass chewed out for it).
That being said, I am highly anticipating the next step in Raven and Changeling's always-evolving relationship. Being frank, much of the plot from the beginning has been used time and time again in all the fan fiction I've read in the last eight years (I may possibly be as old or near as old as you are), BUT, there are many aspects of the story so far that I have been very refreshing, namely the characters' evolvement and backgrounds, the expansion into other super hero involvement (not just DC Comics, which I am glad for), and of course, the creativity you hold with your settings and their cultural aspects - Bludhaven and Tamaran, specifically.
Unfortunately, and - as you may notice due to my writing style - I am very disproving of your grammar and spelling (however, I did note your mention of slight dyslexia, with which I will let some of your errors slide). Would it kill you to do a quick review of your work before posting it? It sure would make a Professional Writing graduate (such as myself) VERY happy.
Before posting my review, I do have a question for you (several, actually, but I will withhold them due to this insanely post I'm about to give you): Do you write professionally, and, if not, have you ever considered publishing your work? Obviously, "Love in Shades of Green and Gray" is too doused in copy right laws to even consider publishing, but you have a knack for inventive and attention-grasping plots. Why not give it a try? Just an idea for you to mull over.
| Guest 5/16/13 . chapter 60
I do not recall raven being sterile. Please update.
| Promises of Freedom 5/15/13 . chapter 60
Is it Raven who is sterile, BB, or both? ;)
| Charlizard777 5/15/13 . chapter 32
That I'm gonna live firefly reference was too forced. :/
Still enjoying this mind you