|Reviews for For the Better|
| ebdarcy.qt4good 3/1/13 . chapter 5
| loveislouder94 9/7/12 . chapter 5
I really liked the parallel you drew between Percy and Aberforth... Overall, well done! :)
| hogwartsharpist 9/3/12 . chapter 5
Love it! Nice job!
| HolyheadHarpy7 9/3/12 . chapter 5
Your making me blush again ;)
I love how Percy transforms throughout these one-shots! And Audrey's part in it!
Great work! And perfect ending :D
| loveislouder94 8/27/12 . chapter 4
It was a good idea alluding to how the twins always called him a prat, and the affect it would have on Percy, to hear that term again. The ending was good too, a introduction into the events of DH... Well done. :)
| HolyheadHarpy7 8/26/12 . chapter 4
Aww shucks! :)
Of course, I love this chapter and how Percy is progressing (though I might be a little biased ;) )
| the belle of the ball x 8/26/12 . chapter 1
I adore this pairing. And I love how you have written them.
| PJHPSGfan 8/26/12 . chapter 4
Yeah! Please update soon! Now Percy's going to be good. I can't wait to see what happens even though I sort of know what does! RIP Fred :(
| PJHPSGfan 8/12/12 . chapter 3
Yeah! Percy's turning good again!
| brilliant incandescence 8/12/12 . chapter 3
GO PERCY! BURN THOSE PAPERS! (Or maybe he shouldn't have, since if Umbridge knew exactly who were in the files, then surely she'd notice them missing and of course, blame him and he'll be targeted instead, which I suppose he'll be grateful for since it's just him and not the whole family, which can only be constituted to the fact that he's a Gryffindor with than idiotic nobility. Excuse the rambling.) I am really quite happy to see the beginnings of his change. I hope he doesn't go back to his old ways ever again (even in lapse of judgement), but if he does because of, perhaps, an Imperius, then I suppose I can't say anything... hm...
| HolyheadHarpy7 8/12/12 . chapter 3
Great chapter my dear ;)
It is so nice to see Percy get some of his sanity back :D Great writing!
| hogwartsharpist 8/11/12 . chapter 3
Good for Percy :) He's such an interesting character and you give him a lot of depth here!
| loveislouder94 8/11/12 . chapter 3
I gained a tad of respect for Percy when he burnt the files, and it is plausible that his transformation would be so gradual. Well done! :)
| loveislouder94 8/11/12 . chapter 2
I don't like Percy much either, but I think you capture his negative traits quite well. Nicely done. :)
| loveislouder94 8/11/12 . chapter 1
An interesting take on Percy and Audrey. The remark "he could do much better than her," was infuriating, but typical of Percy's ambitious character. Well done. :)