Yyyyesss, I finally caught up! May I take a moment to appreciate how wonderful and well written this story is?! I mean my god woman! And now Paul and Ringo are showing signs it just keeps better and better, biting my nails here, c'mon Johnny...can't wait for the next update, plenty of cookies for you! _

And when I awoke, I was alone.
This Bird has flown.
So, I lit the fire.
Isn't it good?
Norwegian Wood.

Awesome chapter. I love how chaotic it is in John's head. I also like how out of their minds worried the other are. Eagerly awaiting the next one.

Very surrealistic chapter... I love it! Very vivid imagery with Lennon's bees. I love the way your writing - his thoughts - flows so smoothly and quickly to another related subject, Kasuto awkwardly explains. That bee bit is easily one of my favourite parts.

I wonder if Paul, at the end, could somehow sense John's problem. Another great chapter!

This chapter isn't sporadic as much as it's... everywhere, like things are for the Beatles at the moment. Everyone's minds are hopping around from place to place, they're all split up, Paul is making himself sick with worrying and Ringo is forgetting to sleep and George is slipping deeper and depper down the same path as John and don't even get me started on him.

I liked the 'dream scenes' with George and John... John's was confusing and nonsensical and just suggestive enough of what's really happening to seem like it actually could take place with someone in his place, and George's deterioration seems to be taking on just as disturbing a turn as John's, with the added fear that he's going to die no matter what he does. And to make matters worse, I'm worried about Paul and Ringo now... Oh, John had better get well soon, this is tearing everyone apart! Noooo!

Eeeek, this keeps getting better and better! Love how the stress is really eating away at the boys (poor babies!), it's making it all the more believeable! I think in terms of sporadicity (making up words, yee) you're doing just fine, this chapter was fantastic! Might I just add in here that the whole bees thing (and bee-tles) was very interesting, I'm just loving this more and more. Can't wait to see what happens with John... And I hope poor George can relax!

This day can't get any better. :) Amazing writing as usual. I still hope John doesn't die, same for George. I liked the way your wrote the nightmare, it was very nice. (?) Anyway, ease oh please oh please keep continuing this story and the other one you've started, love 'me both lots and lots! :D

Beautifully written, as always, and I greatly appreciate the quick update! This story is just wonderful! Can't wait for another chapter! :)

I really loved this chapter one off my favorites by far please keep updating as soon as possible

Uh oh, where's all the optimism gone? Laughter is the best medicine (or so they say), and I would think it to be difficult to heal in a gloomy environment. Not good for John, and not good for George, too. He might not put up as much of a fight if he is depressed and sees what little good fighting did for John. John, who had seemed so strong. Points to Ringo for struggling to keep that optimism there.

There's not only a lack of optimism, but there is much tension present. It's driving the band apart... And when (I refuse to believe IF) John awakes, he should not have to deal with their fighting.

Great chapter! :) It's fascinating to read the other's reactions and thoughts concerning John's death. Different perspectives are fantastic to read because everything is in shades of grey and there is not one correct truth.

Well, I'm just being too lazy to log in, but this is GoodMorningSunshine55... Hello, everyone!

Well, Paul's certainly being an ass, and he really put his foot in his mouth, didn't he? Poor Ringo... And poor George! He probably thinks he'll die now.

I don't really know what to say about this... Except I'm waiting eagerly for more! Although in all seriousness, the scenes with Ringo were my favorite. It's nice to see him trying to pick up the pieces now that all hope appears lost. One can only hope he succeeds.

Gee I saw nothing wrong with the chapter at all...DUN DUN DUN plot twist! Very well done!

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That is simply all I can say. This story is so so good, but the suspense is killing me! Great work! Looking forward to an update!

Oh boy this is getting good...I'm trying to keep moving _

Awww poor Johnny :S excellently written as always _ trying to catch up grrr