Wow, this story is REALLY great! I really respect it a lot. Except for one thing that I would like to point out: You may think that I am saying this just because I am a grumpy old Snicket fan who only sees the misery in the world, but that's wrong. Well, it is true that I am a HUGE Lemony Snicket fan, but I think that a well-minded person such as Daniel Handler would agree with me just the same. Ray and Rose have known each other for two effing months! I mean, just take a Benadril, listen to some Taylor Swift and CALM DOWN before talking about marrage. Sorry to break the bubble, children, but real life is not that syrup coated. Pardon my French, but it isn't smart for people to do whatever suits them at the present and not give a dick about the future. That is my oppinion.

FUCK YEAH! BEST...STORY...EVER! I cannot wait for the next chapter. I am hopelessly in love with Ray, as well as Elwood Blues,so this story helps me live on! You, my friend deserve a metal and a cookie. FUCKING BADASS ROSE AND RAY!1! )

Wow wow wow wow wow! This was absolutely amazing! I've read a few fics before that retell the Ghostbusters movies with or through the eyes of an OC. But what you did here was brilliant. I think that you did a fantastic (I need to stop watching the Ninth Doctor) job incorporating Rose and I loved the romance between her and Ray and Peter's reaction. I like this fic so much that I have to request that you write Ghostbusters 2. Even if you decide not to, you've done a brilliant job in my book. Keep it up.

yay! will you be doing the sequel?

Aww I love Egon!

hmm...either let the fight continue until they fight Gozer and have something happen to Rose that'll make Peter regret what he said or have them forgive Peter around the time they get arrested

Awwww tres bien! Coah, Peters gonna everything in his power to stop them now isn't he? Can't wait for the next chapter, keep me posted! :D

aw! lol the dream scene. best part of that montage

You've earned an audible "NOOO!" from me when Peter showed up.
My family thinks I'm crazy now. Thanks.

oh it's all ok. i understand you were busy with other things.

ooh! Peter's onto them! what's going to happen?

i'll be waiting!

I hope you update soon.
I really want to read the rest.

chapter is with wrong story, is posted on Ghostbusters

awesome! i'm so excited to see what's going to happen next

Peter's on to them! lol
I love the little banter between Ray and Rose.
Keep it up.