So awesome! So original! Please keep writing!

Just powered through all 12 chapters of this story.

GREAT WORK SO FAR! KEEP UP THE GOOD JOB!

a few glaring points though, When you put nobody's POV, you should instead write "3rd Person Prospective."

And i feel your pain about reviews, my stories average 11 hits a day in the last 12 months, but ONLY 21 reviews!? Don't worry so much about the quantity of feedback but pay attention to the QUALITY of what they tell you!

Remember,

Feedback to writers
is like
Water to flowers
So,
Water a writer today!

Later, Gator!

glad I made you smile :)
Keep up the good work !

So your and eighth grader? Cool. I am, or will be this Wednesday. Love the chapter and can't wait to see what Aya does. :)

hope you update soon(: Great Chapter!(:

Very interesting premise for this story- here I figured she was a mermaid... liked the twist. Hope you can post more soon..

Its , ok , i understand :)
All I ask is that you keep up the good work and not do anything silly like giving up the story now :)

wowzer! sorry I didn't review I was on vacation and just didn't feel into reading anything when I got back butt, great chapters(:

Amazing! I was wondering what Aya was. Love the story and see you at the next chapter!

WOAH! that was not exactly what i had thought would happen but your a very good writing and i cant wait for you to update!

Ah.A shpaeshifter. That explains it. Somehow I think the chapter would have been more effective if it was Ziva's POV when witnessing the shift , but that's just a little thing , this chapter is great!
I can't wait to see how the rest of the story turns out , keep it up!And thanks for the mention in your author's note :) :)

Great story, and interesting :) please update soon.. :D

haha this is great! your a good author. I have never laughed as hard as I did for the end of this chapter! :) keep it up!

ps i'm reviewing from chap 6

few spelling mistakes , but you are doing a good job.
keep it up!

that middle part was funny