Dear Hawklan,

This is a truly amazing piece of art, but I did notice some grammatical mistakes using their,there and they're and so on so fourth. This is avery wonderful start to a story. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Yow! Really good, but still yow!

Any chance of some happier Willow & Xander stuff in the future?

It is excellent chapter i look forward to future updates.