   Th' Lady Shadow 7/13/02 . chapter 2Hehe, wonderful chapter...but where're all the line breaks? X_X And you talk about MY fics being crammed together, hehe!
*Gives it a clean bill of poignancy and the Shaddeh Stamp of Uber-Coolness.* :D
Mmm...poignancy...yummy! 9 You've given the impression that there's gonna be lots of seriousness with the occasional oasis of fluffy goodness, so I'm savoring this one. Mweehee.
I wish I had a little more info on this Akeno guy, though. I don't remember his presence in ATFR - if he was in there and I've just forgotten...well...oopsie. ; It didn't bother me when I first read the chapter, but when I looked over it a couple days later, I kinda scratched me head in ponderation. I can tell he's gonna be a bad guy (Whoohoo! Villains! *Cackle.*) but that's about all...I'd like to know how he got into the picture, why smart people like Jecht and Braska trust him...and why the heck there are armed forces in the Farplane! D Hoping for answers soon! *Holds up a cardboard sign reading 'Will beg for fanfiction.'*
Urk. Timmeh's never on anymore. XD It's not fair - Timmeh's gotten a life! Hehe. You're not supposed to have a life, you're a -geekazoid like me! ;D Or maybe you're just sleeping the day away. In that case, go right ahead. Timmeh deserves to sleep 'til September. 3
Well since you've been MIA, I've started my Jecht/Amia fic, half-finished Chapter 14, and also started a retelling of FFX the way I've always wanted it done: through Yuna's POV. I've been a busy little girl, mmhmm! _ I've also taken back that PS2 game I got (the people in FuncoLand practically know me by name now. XD ) and I got Xenogears...and a copy in great condition, too! D Not to mention I reserved a copy of Kingdom Hearts, putting down a hefty $5 towards it. Boy, am I rich. X3
Yer gonna like Ch. 14. It's almost 100% pure, untainted fluff.
Well, anyway, glad to see the next chapter's out, and can't wait for Chapter 3! Hehe, oaky? I gotta go now. _ Ta-ta, Timmeh!
Shaddeh
PS: XD And exactly what's wrong with long strings of dialogue? Hehe. Next time I see you, do me a favor and whack some sense into me. I can't really see how Tidus and Yuna were overly wordy in Chappeh 13. I know it's just me being stubborn, so lead me into the light! XD Please?
Well, aidos-ness! |
| mistiza 6/29/02 . chapter 1 Let's make this short... seems to like going ICK whenever I write a long review _.
Nice start so far, I like. _ DRAMA! ACTION! (suspense?) I'm very much looking forward to what you got in store. Like I said to ya earlier, I couldn't find anything to be nitpicky on so...YAY! No more typing for me! _ Ja mata! |
| Th' Lady Shadow 6/29/02 . chapter 1 Oooh...SEQUEL! *Snatch.*
Hehe, the long-awaited sequel to the smash hit "A Time for Reflection" makes its debut...and whoo, is it good!
Yuna's the aggressor, 'course...she seems to uh, have changed a bit since we last saw her in our dear fic ATFR. _; I'll see how that goes. It's a bit iffy right now, but that's okay - we've got an entire story ahead of us!
The beginning was a little confusing. But only the first two paragraphs, in relation to Tidus' situation...it made me go back and read them over once or twice and go, 'huh?' Which means you need to fix somethin'...
BUT! I LOVED the beginning. Clock ticking. Rain. GOODY! Hehe. Giving readers information in little fragmentish things is a great (and catchy!) tactic. Muhaha.
Can't wait to see where this goes...but for now, I've gotta go finish packing! Eek! Hehe. I'll see ya next week, Timster. Keep writing! Or I'm gonna send them Cheerleadin' Chiggers after you! XD
The Aspiring Typo Queen (LOL...don't you say a word XD )...Shaddeh! |
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