| Reviews for Jayden & Ty: The New Alphas |
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anonymous 9/27/12 . chapter 6 give us a gary, jayden meeting. if you would be so kind. |
RoGuEsOuLwRiTeR 9/23/12 . chapter 1my twin is autistic, so here are pointers. *jayden would be low functioning autistic. high functioning means she works well in environments low functioning austistics wouldn't like subways, loud places basically. *they hear alot of background noise other people can't and they notice more things people usually do. *they have bad tantrums and get frustrated easily *they say random things, because they have trouble figuring out what to say. that's a lot of basic info, but so far, this is good! |
Saving Annabel 8/28/12 . chapter 3I like it so far. Keep writing. |
Teyerin 7/28/12 . chapter 1Interesting details in the telling of Jayden's past. I like how you set her apart, not only because of her uniqueness, but how different she was from the rest of her family - it gives a sense of solitude to her. Good cliffhanger, too. |