| Reviews for Dismiss Your Fears |
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Sandra 6/10/13 . chapter 24 I love it. I felt like it was happening I'm real life |
Didi 6/9/13 . chapter 24 Please plz plz plz plz write a epilogue :( |
Guest 5/12/13 . chapter 24 It's was sooo beautiful I dont really like to read agust but im glad i read this one. I really hope you come back with a sequel.. |
Guest 5/9/13 . chapter 24 keep going! It's really good. |
Noa 4/17/13 . chapter 24 okay. I made up my mind. Your my favorite writer of all time! And you're out of this world! I mean ... gosh... you made me cry so many times. And yes I finished this story in one day and I haven't done anything I should have done. :D Please never stop writing. |
Guest 4/12/13 . chapter 24 WHAT THE FUCK I HAVE NEVER CRIED THIS MUCH IN MY LIFE FUCK FUCK FUCK |
Tokita21 4/6/13 . chapter 24This is the best fanfic I've ever read and the new song that is supposed to be in Demi's new Album "in case" it's like it was written to Selena. I heard it and remembered this story. Now I believe that one day they will find the way to the other and they will be together. |
delenalovez 3/14/13 . chapter 24w o w I'm crYING OVER HERE |
Anon 2/27/13 . chapter 24 A heart full of love, no fears, no regrets. |
Guest 2/14/13 . chapter 24 GIRL you on some cray shit u think this ishow it can end hell no nope bring someone else on or some shit dont leave it bring it forward and have them get tgether this is like the fanfiction i read where they both die NO ITS NOT FAIR MORE NOW |
disneylover21 2/11/13 . chapter 24GAAAAH WHYYYY |
what 2/9/13 . chapter 24 Man, what the fuuuuck was that Is this the end? Why not just a happy end for this world we live in. We already have sad endings and you can't give humans just a silver lining of hope? Watch silver linings playbook. i'm referencing to it. But i hope this is not the end. |
poop 2/9/13 . chapter 24 thank you for making me cRY |
x-donttrust 2/8/13 . chapter 24(I was looking at my review on the previous chapter, and I'm like "WTF? 'Prologue'?" Hahaha, English is not my first language. I meant 'epilogue'. Shit.) At first, I thought pretty much what everyone else did: "Why? Why can't they be together, after everything? Why does it have to be like this, they deserve their happy ending!" And it is true, they do deserve their happy ending. But you wanted to write this as realistic as possible; so the fairy tale happy ending wouldn't have made sense. After reading it again, and again, I see now. I love the fact that you left the "Someday." in there, because that's how I feel about them, not only in fiction but in real life too. They had something too strong to let go, but there is too much between them; not only Justin Bieber, but friends, families, careers. Maybe, in the future, they can pick up from where they left, as naturally as you wrote in some of the chapters here. Perhaps that was the best point in the whole story. Not just the cute scenes, bad situations and the giddy nicknames; but the love. It's there, it's everywhere, and it's angsty, it's raw, pure, desperate, it is ibeautiful/i. You did it so well, I should congratulate you yet again, for your writing. Even in the end, this painful end, I can see it. Love, hope. All of it. So, favorite bits! (Besides "pretty girl", haha!) The chapter where Selena yells at Taylor for calling Demi crazy really gets me, because we get to see Selena, our usually sweet, well mannered girl snapping at her best friend. Also, the third one I think... where you wrote the scene with the good and the bad day. It was an interesting contrast of how their relationship worked at that point in the story. The part from where Selena went visiting Demi in rehab until their gorgeous dinner in that field and the morning after were really touching to me, too. Especially when Selena gave Demi her presents. I was swooning, haha. And when Demi showed up after Mandy's miscarriage, it was really strong and touching, too. And of course, the last two. Their "hot date" was incredibly well written. It was like us, readers, were snooping in and seeing them dance in the dim lit restaurant. Amazing. You could give it a sequel, not now, but in the future. This story has a lot of potential to be worked with, still, haha. Our girls as adults, trying to figure everything out... In the meantime, I am looking forward to your other story. You are too good to ever stop writing; there's a lot of talent in there. Thank you for writing this. It's kept me awake a lot of nights, and I'll always read it with a smile on my face. It's definitely my favorite Demi/Selena story ever now, because it's the most real one. |
RaeAnneCaboosey 2/8/13 . chapter 24This is my favourite fic of all time and im bawling my eyes out. Please consider doing an epilogue 3 its so sad but im glad you wrote this chapter. |