I love the second sentence. And the first.

You say so much with so little words. It is fun to read, wonderful to think of and draws so many, so almost-real images in my mind I wish I could see them on paper.

The scene you are describing here is one of the most touching and most nerve-wrecking ones of the entire series, and you captured it wonderfully.

Once again, wow.

Like Heavensbee, I never thought much about Effie, and especially not that Haymitch could feel anything else towards her than hate. But the way he describes her he has watched her closely. I cannot remember her role in the last book very well but the way you (Haymitch) describe(s) her she is a very caring person, underneath all her glitter and glamour. Thinking of it, she should have had a little more time on stage, I guess

Thanks for a great chapter.

I really liked this story it's good like the other stories that u write I especially like the color theory but I notice u didn't finish it can u pls finish it a lot of people want u to finish to :)

The Hunger Games!

I loved the books, and the movie was fine, too.

I think you captured the scene very well, with Katniss watching Peeta. It's what she seems to be doing most of the time. Her gift of observation is pretty good and I liked the way she noted peace was short-lived in the Games only to have Peeta wake up immediately after the thought. Or, at least, it seemed like this even though the observation was a follow-up from his abrupt waking.

Using the distance between them was a good idea, too. It might have been only six feet but it seemed far more to me. And perhaps to Katniss, too, but who knows.

This was a short, good chapter and I'm looking forward to the ones to come! Thanks for writing and sharing it!

I will always love everything you write, even if it isn't my fandom. I saw on your profile you're writing for SasuSaku month, so hopefully that'll be up soon, yeah? I can't wait to read more from you. :)

I really like the way you built Foxface's character, it's very believable. She was a very interesting character and I wish we got to see a bit more of her - she's so clever. You pointed something out to me, that her death was kind of lucky. At least she didn't suffer the way Cato did. Well done!