great write more

U didnt put anything in bout wat the moms did

Good, she can read, that is a big step.

Aw, how sweet.

How tender. He should use the alphabet song.

A good alternate, that is so sweet.

Very romantic, even if Ella was feeling embarrassed.

Aw, so precious.
Wow, you made Ella illiterate. That is probably very likely and a powerful statement about that relationship.

I don't know why but the thought of Ella speaking in mouse is just so sad. It just makes her feel so small and sad. Song bird is nicer.

Trust Eugene to figure out the languages by kind.

I _LOVE_ that they are speaking in animal-speach and that you used different font settings to show the different languages! WHEEE! Brilliant!
I hope they can charm those snakes.

I can see those step-sisters being that mean.

Aw, she really misses her Daddy. She needs lots of loving.

very nice story so far. i really like it. hope you update again soon

A sweet song. Miley Cyrus is good. But I see Ella singing it a lot slower and sadder. I just want to hug her so much.

Good, they are planning ahead.