|Reviews for A new chance|
| Sky 5/23/13 . chapter 4
hi! i like your fanfiction! good job!
so you need some more oc's? thats great! i love makeing up charactors! so here we go!
name: Jake leafrider
description: he has messy dark brown hair, emaraled green eyes, he wears a long sleeved forest green shirt, brown pants, brown boots and an green cloak with a hood
habits: he doesnt like to stay still for to long, he tends to fiddle and fidget, he always wears a little brown pouch around his neck containg potion supplies for emergencies (the bag is way bigger on the inside), he can play the flute and he takes it almost every were with him
wand: his wand is a typical life wand which is a stick with a few green leafs on it
persanality: he's very loyal, smart, resourcefull and creative, he's also very protective of his friends, (he has no family) and when they are threatened he's very aggresive and he will do anything to protect them
likes: his favourite color is green, he likes to paint, draw, sculpt, read and write, his favourite animal is a dragon and he loves to fly
dislikes: he hates the color pink, anyone who is mean, rude or threatining to him or his friends and he also hates it when others have to protect or help him.
do you like him? bye!
| james night 4/1/13 . chapter 4
i dont know if its to late to add a for my tardiness.
weapon:sword (80 damage)
clothes:wears a black suit,a black hat,and black shoes.
bio:james was a transfer student from ravenwood to pigswick power of the magic went to his one day he decided to get revenge on wizard city for kicking him is a hard to convince person.
habits:destroying all good
relationship:eh, you decide
| Moonlight blade 4/1/13 . chapter 15
Nice chapter,after so long. It cooled off my head after panicking that you could have abandoned this wonderful story. I wonder who that is...
| NightSkyWolves 4/1/13 . chapter 4
My greatest apologies but I have made the decision to revise Valkyrie. I face palmed about a million times when I read her format, and I felt like I needed to fix some stuff on her. I was horribly obsessed with BRS at the time, so I'm immensely sorry for messing her up so bad.
Name: Valkyrie Shadowwings
Level: 63 (my actual wizard completed Waterworks three times yesterday! Woo!)
School: Myth (Every villain I see is a Necromancer!)
Secondary School: Fire
Wand/Weapon: a triple blade axe with Astral symbols respectfully engraved onto each blade. It is a pale orangish indigo color and has multicolored sparks encircling it.
Personality: Valkyrie is very deceptive. She could act like she's on your team but really isn't. She's very calm in many situations, but is easily annoyed and always ready to kill someone. She often narrows her eyes in annoyance or anger, and that means RUN. She is quite arrogant and takes insults as if they don't hurt at all. She loves to insult people's powers with statements such as, "Weak." or "You act like THAT would hurt me."
Appearance: Valkyrie has somewhat wavy, kinda long pale blonde hair. It falls only a little bit beneath her midback. Its quite choppy in some places. She has dull gold eyes that still read "I'm going to slay you and enjoy it." She has an average skin tone. She wears the Tricksy apparel. (Ya know, Waterworks.) The hood is sometimes pulled down, but she constantly wears the rest of it.
Bio: Valkyrie woke up in Dragonspyre with absolutely no memory of who she was whatsoever. She was approached by the Dragon Titan, who told her a false tale of who she was and her mission in life. She was easily deluded and listened to the entire story of the Titan. He told her that she had been murdered by a powerful Thaumaturge, and that she had been revived so she wouldn't have to die too young. He added that she could join the side of the shadow to take her revenge, and so she did.
Likes: Valkyrie loves to attack her enemies, torture them in all ways possible, allow them to feel the impact of her axe, and imagining what it would be like to ride a dragon. She absolutely loves Drakes.
Dislikes: The sight of good coming to her is her main hate. She actually fears the day the same Thaumaturge will come to strike her down. She hates losing, and having to experience pain inflicted on her instead of others.
Habits: She has a habit of constantly using Earthquake on her enemies once they blade, and has a love for summoning her Orthrus to heal her.
Relationship: Meh... Maybe.
Other: If she is to be fought in traditional Wizarding combat, then she is indeed a cheating boss.
Cheats: There has to be an equal amount of blades and traps on each person. On the first round, if they all cast traps on her, she in return will allow them to blade. But one blade per person. (Blade storm is unrecognized) They CANNOT attack without blade and trap, or else it will trigger her Power Earthquake cheat. (The earth shall part to save us!) And when that's done... (One blade and trap shall save the ground.)
Hope she's better now!
| NightSkyWolves 4/1/13 . chapter 15
Holy crap! Epiceness at the end!
This Incinerator person sounds AWESOME! She's my new favorite character for some reason. XD
| Moonlight blade 3/25/13 . chapter 1
Author,will you please update? It's almost been a month...
| Moonlight blade 3/11/13 . chapter 14
Hello? Anyone? Hi,4321. Why are there no updates for 3 weeks? I'm almost dying from suspense,and w101 trutha nd dare is just about everything keeping me sane right now.
| dance.till.i.drop 2/19/13 . chapter 14
Yep. Come on 4321! We know you can do it! (Get better at writing)
Very nice chapter, and can't wait till the next one!
| Moonlight blade 2/18/13 . chapter 14
Wait. Forgot something. *is shot* prepare for detail! Lots of it.
Did I mention that Christina often wears a long white flowing cape set with a light blue snowflake (acual snowflake,not the ice school symbol)surrounded by a single pair of white,feathered wings at the bottom of the snowflake,and are spread out and reaches up,design on the back of the cape? Usually wears it outside of combat but does wear it inside combat sometimes. It is fairly light so it does not lag her down while moving. But it is quite long,reaching down to the ground,and tends to flow around a lot,even in a light wind. It is held on the front with a silver chain clasp that is set with a small blue stone. And you don't have to edit,let's just say she forgot to wear it or something,though she's pretty attached to it. And as for her sister... She hates her. My level has been skyrocketing again,level's now 88 my spell quest was easy though
| Moonlight blade 2/18/13 . chapter 14
So that's what it was! I was wondering when a update would come! Loved this chapter with all my heart! Really cheered me up for the day christina enjoys going to dragonspyre though... As well as studying stuff in celestia did I mention she always steers clear of marley unless ordered to go? Hmm... Mirror spell... I wonder what she picked up in celestia...
Now,for these truths I promised...
Connor:Christina,how did I not notice you in the beginning?
Christina:I was practicing stuff.
Jack:author,how did the arena master turn evil?
Author:-cannot say- spoiler!
Christina:author,why were you lazy for a bit?
Author:I don't wanna say...
Sorry,brain dead. I'll think up more soon...
Anyway,I loved this chapter thanks for the update and don't be lazy,it's not good
| Alice the B-Rabbit 2/18/13 . chapter 14
Great chapter and i think the fight scene was awesome!
| DeathySophia 2/18/13 . chapter 14
Thanks for cooling off my head a little with an update to my email, I been having major headache the past week and I am in need of some entertainment XD
The battle... O.O It's like watching Naruto lol. And wow, that was a pretty dramatic change of events. The enemy was so darn though! I wonder what Krokopatra will be like... o.O
ps: my oc's main school is Myth btw, but actually I first made her a Ice wiz so yeah, I think it's fine lol. This chapter kinda surprised me considering how you said you were gonna change her a little last time. Oh, don't get me wrong because I enjoyed that ;)
| NightSkyWolves 2/18/13 . chapter 14
I forgot to detail Valkyrie's history. X.X -is shot-
Valkyrie grew up residing in the shadows, attempting to escape a dimension deemed "the Otherworld." She lived in fear of death, fear because her other self would be alone if she died. So when the portal to Avalon opened to her as she was making her escape from a certain blue haired other self, she instantly leaped through it. When she emerged from the Spiral door, she noticed her other self sitting alone, injured severely and crying. (Her other self was eight at the time.) Valkyrie walked over, asking her other self what was wrong, and the other replied saying that she was lonely and in pain. That's when Valkyrie made a forbidden choice. She told her other self that she would protect in exchange for her ability to feel pain, and offer her a wish as well. The other female instantly took the deal, her wish phrase being "I wish to be able to protect Avalon, at any cost!" Then Valkyrie told her that she was going to have to die after her wish came true, but her other self didn't care. So... yea. She's trying to kill her now, and Emma can't remember anything about the deal.
| NightSkyWolves 2/18/13 . chapter 14
Awesome twist on what appeared to be a simple battle! Continue, please! :D
| Celestial light 2/1/13 . chapter 13
Please,author,I need a update! Your taking so long for the next update! I want to read more of this awesome story! And this chapter was pretty short too!