|Reviews for Rivulets|
| this SHIP of FOOLS 7/31/12 . chapter 1
Oh my god vicky this is the most amazingly beautiful, well written thing I've ever seen! Amelie was so very... I don't even know. She's awesome and you wrote her amazingly. Sam was awesome and omg. Vicky. I can't wait for the next chapter! I am so hating Amelie's dad right now. Hopefully they get away!
| felines 7/31/12 . chapter 1
Wow, this was amazing! I fear for Amelie in the next chapter for she'll have to drag an unconscious Sam with her. Great job, and great writing!
| momo-mv 7/31/12 . chapter 1
You're going to break my heart, aren't you? :(
| Vitzy 7/31/12 . chapter 1
I love this so much. Its beautifully written. The 1912 period setting is gorgeous. I LOVE period settings, there is something poignant about it, and this was no exception.
Vicky, don't let anything happen to them. yeah? Don't make it a tragic ending. I'll be sad.
| she was slightly 7/30/12 . chapter 1
Morganville Vampires, like my sister, I have read. Well, until like 'Last Breath' and I got lost in world of dystopian societies and John Green.
It was a spectacular read, actually, the Titanic theme of it was really good. I don't really read much fanfics but when I do they're incredibly long or something. This was quite good, hah, I could see some parts of it being in character, where she has that cold front up, that lovely past. Well, Mr. Bishop is a bastard, and as highly ambitious as ever. But I love him. Amelie, a very good characterisation, French and all and her plans, and adkfl;d perfect. I did like the back and forth between Amelie and Sam's POVs, it brings amusement to me in a strange manner I cannot even understand. I like that they're human. Without powers, they can't really do anything, eh? It brings in the entire Titanic chronological sequence in. They're stuck there, unless they board a rowboat and well, 'row' away. Loved that concept. And fuck, the last line;
"…Amelie just can't accept that it may be because he's right…and that the RMS Titanic may be no more by morning dawn."
Gah! I loved it.
Can't wait for the rest.
| Flying Penguinz 7/30/12 . chapter 1
I think this is the best thing I've read from you ever. It pulled me in the way other fanfics can't. It's weird that everyone's human, but it makes things more real in a way because the ship's sinking and they won't be able to use their super powers and swim to shore or rowboat as fast as a speedboat to New York.
Bishop is a dick.
Sam is (as always) the perfect gentleman.
And Amelie is French and beautiful.
I can't wait for the action.
| amaranthined 7/30/12 . chapter 1
god vicky could your writing get anymore beautiful?
I love the alternating POVs between Amelie and Sam and how you characterized them. Since I don't really read MV, I don't know if they're OOC or not, but I love them both, anyway. :D
Their falling in love was played out perfectly and Sam is just akjhskdfas
I can't wait for more!
| my insides are blue 7/29/12 . chapter 1
omg Vicky, this is so beautiful and lovely!
I love Titanic and I loved the way you wrote this. It was romantic and believable from the first. Even in such a short time frame, you made them fall in love so naturally. And I love Sam, haha! He's so sweet and protective of Amelie. I don't know if they're OOC or whatever, but in this fic they are perfect. I always admire your attention to detail in your writing, and I saw that even here.
asdfghjk this is gorgeous!
I want to read more, even though I have a feeling I'm going to start crying at the end. But update soon, okay?
Flawless work! :D
| MidnightMelody 7/29/12 . chapter 1
WOW! seriously, don't ever give up writing- you have a natural talent! This was a pleasure to read. I'm at loss for words! You are amazing! :D
| yellow 14 7/29/12 . chapter 1
To Death do us part...which should be very soon I think. Very good start, keep updating
| winter's etude 7/28/12 . chapter 1
holy crap that was amazing
i actually do read morganville vampires, but i'm only on the second book and i've already read all of the spoilers, so, i know everything.
i love titanic and this and HOW THE HELL DOES ONE WRITE A 7K IN ONE DAY OKAY YOU, MAH DEAR, ARE INCREDIBLE
ah you should sleep vicky
| iridescent bookyworm 7/28/12 . chapter 1
Okay this is perfect I'm not even joking. The titanic is my obsession and this whole story was just a pleasure to read. From the romance to the drama to the beatuful writing, I love this. And this line
'you're even more perfect when you're asleep."
That's just so chilling and romantic!