|Reviews for When Will He Give Up?|
| Trollface 2000 2/18/13 . chapter 35
I don't understand why you are getting so much praise, since the writing was horrible and the plot isn't even good. I honestly don't understand why people here call you a good writer, because you aren't. And you could use a lot of improvement and teaching. Like, a LOT. Possibly more than there is available on this planet.
| Trollface 2000 2/15/13 . chapter 29
Finally, you gave it to a Beta! I mean, it was almost impossible to read it up to this point, the grammar and spelling was so bad!
| snowflake 2/2/13 . chapter 35
HI! I really trust you on doing the new story. You are a sooooooooo gooooood writer so I bet its gonna be really good. Good luck with your new story and thank you for this awsome story. By the way, sorry for my bad english, hehe!
| humanusscriptor 2/1/13 . chapter 35
Me: *My disappointment face* Awww... you beat me to it! *Face turns serious, like Lanny* Not that I was gonna make a sequel or anything for that book. I mean, I was gonna do a...well... it wouldn't be titled that anyways. I was a poor, lonely peasant for the kings on Kinkow. But, who needs Kinkow when I got Lanada!
Lanny: Ata boy!
Me: Lanada will be the greatest island ever! And I don’t have to worry about running in to Zielsty. Lanny are I *puts hand on Lanny’s shoulder* are watching you…
*Two of us leave*
Me(turning around): But seriously, can I do my own sequel?
Oh, and there you are. 33 faves, 33 follows.
| humanusscriptor 2/1/13 . chapter 29
| humanusscriptor 2/1/13 . chapter 25
Brady, put on your thinking caps
| humanusscriptor 2/1/13 . chapter 16
Well, it appears I'm not the only one who does the ...
| humanusscriptor 2/1/13 . chapter 13
Too lazy to log in presently. Did Mickenzie just lay down the F-Bomb?
| humanusscriptor 2/1/13 . chapter 11
As before, too lazy to log in right now. Brady's just scored some big man points by asking her out.
| humanusscriptor 2/1/13 . chapter 3
Too lazy to log in right now. Well picked title for the chapter.
| Yummy42 1/30/13 . chapter 35
Haha u know what i just realized? That u ended this story Exactly four months after you first published this!
| Den Blue 1/30/13 . chapter 35
I can't wait for the sequel! Oh, and the cover picture is really awesome.
| Codex 1/29/13 . chapter 35
Post the sequel soon.
| Cailey 1/29/13 . chapter 35
Sorry I didn't know you finished it here. It was an amazing story to read can't wait for the sequel:)
| crystalsoda1 1/28/13 . chapter 35
OOOOOH I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL YOU WRITE IT!