I don't understand why you are getting so much praise, since the writing was horrible and the plot isn't even good. I honestly don't understand why people here call you a good writer, because you aren't. And you could use a lot of improvement and teaching. Like, a LOT. Possibly more than there is available on this planet.

Finally, you gave it to a Beta! I mean, it was almost impossible to read it up to this point, the grammar and spelling was so bad!

HI! I really trust you on doing the new story. You are a sooooooooo gooooood writer so I bet its gonna be really good. Good luck with your new story and thank you for this awsome story. By the way, sorry for my bad english, hehe!

Me: *My disappointment face* Awww... you beat me to it! *Face turns serious, like Lanny* Not that I was gonna make a sequel or anything for that book. I mean, I was gonna do a...well... it wouldn't be titled that anyways. I was a poor, lonely peasant for the kings on Kinkow. But, who needs Kinkow when I got Lanada!
Lanny: Ata boy!
Me: Lanada will be the greatest island ever! And I don’t have to worry about running in to Zielsty. Lanny are I *puts hand on Lanny’s shoulder* are watching you…
*Two of us leave*
Me(turning around): But seriously, can I do my own sequel?
Oh, and there you are. 33 faves, 33 follows.

*audience claps*

Brady, put on your thinking caps

Well, it appears I'm not the only one who does the ...
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Too lazy to log in presently. Did Mickenzie just lay down the F-Bomb?

As before, too lazy to log in right now. Brady's just scored some big man points by asking her out.

Too lazy to log in right now. Well picked title for the chapter.

Haha u know what i just realized? That u ended this story Exactly four months after you first published this!

I can't wait for the sequel! Oh, and the cover picture is really awesome.

Post the sequel soon.

Sorry I didn't know you finished it here. It was an amazing story to read can't wait for the sequel:)

OOOOOH I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL YOU WRITE IT!