This is beautiful, both the story and your writing. It captures perfectly the main point of the game, which is the solemn nature of Wander's sacrifice. I love how the battles with the Colossi were not necessarily the main focus, and how you tied them into Wander's memories of Mono. A pleasure to read (:

I love this. I love you. This is wonderful.

Well, I finally finished it! And I found it very interesting and quite touching; I already liked the concept of losing memories every time a Colossus is slain. It kind of builds up to the "rebirth". It's not -poof- he is suddenly a baby. It felt like he aged backwards; losing the memories until his body followed and he had fully become a baby. I liked that concept and all the memories together did explore Wander and Mono's relationship. And even though he lost most of his memories, he still loves Mono. That's beautiful in a tragic way. The memories themselves were good, too. They could be funny (Wanda and the Turdle xd - "tonight I dine on turtle soup!"), but also touching.

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Oh Wander :'(

This is lovely, once again, you wrote amazing fic. I sure love the epic saga of "Wanda and the Turdle"

Am I only only one who comes here anymore? It's a shame because these are such good stories X'D

Wow, this one is good! I love the way you filled Wander with memories of him and Mono, and taking it away in each Colossi battle. Quite subtle, warm, but leaves tint of regret, like a distant fondest memories that slowly sliping away, that's what I get from your writing to expresses Wander's reminiscence. Please continue :D

This is beautiful and amazing. I love it.