very good

That was really good. I liked the way it switched back and forth between their POVs. I especially loved the end and the symbolic rain, washing away the past...it was really good.

Oh, enjoyed reading this :)
Love that last paragraph!
Excellent story throughout though, give yourself a pat on the back

Wow, great fic, you captured to Buffy's attraction to 'William' and her slight disgust at that feelings perfectly and I loved the ending, Buffy/Spike FOREVER

WOw. You have an amazing handle on imagery and word-use here. Loved it as an answer to that challenge.

This is just neat. Beautiful in its simplicity and fulfilling, full of great imagery and quite well done. The short vignette is my favorite kind of fiction and this is why...you capture a sensation, and there is a sense of fulfillment, and yet not. Good job; I have read your stuff before and you have a grasp of character and the internal monologue that I love.

Beautiful - I loved the spiralling of the story, her to him and back to her, speeding up until the inevitable end - like a sexual act in its rhythms and climax.
But I suspect your story attributes purer motives and feelings to her than were there in the series.

Very nice I must say. You have a tallent for discription.

That was breath taking. At least it took my breath away. I feel like you got into the writers mind at the very moment that Spike and Buffy came together, and then Wrecked happened. I can't put the right feelings down I have, I cant express them properly, but to me, it seems like this is exactly how they both felt in the show for months before they finally broke up. Thanks.

That was lovely, the imagery was very striking - quite visual.

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