Reviews for Eddie
hudsonrose11 5/22/13 . chapter 11
is it weird that i thought it was the mother all along?
HOAluver7089 8/10/12 . chapter 11
Aww thats was so cute
Totes Inappropes 8/9/12 . chapter 11
Yay, satisfactory ending! Well done :)
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#totesinappropes.
Guest 8/9/12 . chapter 11
i knew it was the parents
Guest 8/9/12 . chapter 11
Ha ha! That ending was funny!

"Melanie-e-e-e!" I sang. "Who's the prettiest girl in the world?"

"Da-Da"

Omg! I can't stop laughing at that! And I KNEW that Patricia's parents kidnapped Melanie! All evidence pointed to them! PLEASE continue!
Guest 8/8/12 . chapter 10
THEIR YOU GO ROMANCE
HOAluver7089 8/8/12 . chapter 10
Hope they dont give up on melanie
Guest 8/6/12 . chapter 8
it is the same thing every time they fight then they make up and promise not to fight but always does you should make a chapter with them not fighting and have romance
HOAluver7089 8/6/12 . chapter 8
Loved the end line
Guest 8/6/12 . chapter 8
PLease continue soon!
HOAluver7089 8/5/12 . chapter 7
Aww poor eddie
Guest 8/4/12 . chapter 6
true that pray on that they need to stop fight
Guest 8/4/12 . chapter 6
CONTINUE! Oh, and LOL with Moy! That was such a ripoff!
HOAluver7089 8/4/12 . chapter 6
Lol funny moment with mick and joy
HOAluver7089 8/3/12 . chapter 5
hate when eddie and patricia fight but ok. feel so sorry for melanie
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