That was a good little one shot, I liked your same beginning same end thing, with something different.

That is amazing! Poor Max. Her live has been a nightmare since Esther killed her dad! Evil Esther.

wow deep

What can I say about this? It's just amazing.. Your use of imagery and the contrast between the 'truth' and 'lies' is just mind blowing. I see this as being very plausible, as poor little Max witnessed so much traumatic events at such a young age.

The thing that I like most about this is the ending. It's not clear to me, but I'm under the impression that Max shot and killled an innocent little girl, believing her to be Leena. Such a harrowing thought..

This. All of this. Love your characterizations, love your writing style, love this piece.

Wow. This is chilling. Brilliant and chilling. It's got a real psychological thriller feel to it. Wow. Well done. This really is a good twist on what could happen after the events of Orphan.
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Ummmm...I don't know what to say. Seriously freaked out right now O.o probably won't sleep very much tonight

I really like this :) Good job. :)