It's so cuteeeee. (picture a six-year-old saying this) The best of luck in your contest. :)

Aaaw this was adorabkle! I have never read a oneshot about Hotaru that could make me squeal like a die-hard NatsumexMIkan fanatic. Do you know how much of an honor that is? (Nah, haha, I'm just kidding.) But seriously, rarely ever do I read oneshots about Hotaru that are "this" friggin damn good. You did an awesome job.

From start to finish, I was captured by the lovely way that you write. The descriptions of the humor and cute fluff scenese were top notch. Not only did you make the plot flow, but you made the ending go out with a bang. I absolutely adored this cute little oneshot. It was magnifique! Fantastico!

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awee, sweet :D