It's a shame that your story doesn't get much reviews cause its totally awesome! You need to write more cause i can't wait for the next chapter. Pls update soon!

Trop cool ! Séphiria et Creed débarquent ! L'idée avec Zaguine je ne m'y attendait vraiment pas! Et puis Train avait raison depuis le début, est-ce qu'il pourra pardonner à ses amis qui l'ont trahi ?
Continue. J'attend la suite avec impatience.

HOLY S**T! those bastards! they're gonna kill him! I think I know who that Doctor really is.

Argh! Cliffhanger alert! I'm gonna die before the next chapter, that how excited I am!

NOOOOOOO! I NEED MORE!(insert ungodly amount of exclamation points here...) I need to know what happens! What is the final operation! Update please!and is the coma patient saya? Why is Subditus doing this? Why did they trick them? Are they with chronos? so many questions!

they forgot about Eve? wow Sven. that makes him awful father.
love the chapter. poor Train. I wonder if he's going to try again when he wakes up.

Nice idea this escape, I waited it but I imagine it wilder.
However I really hope that this Sarah won't be a new Saya for Train.

awww. this chapter is so sweet.

whoa! now it getting really close to the scene in the beginning. can't wait for more.

I want to cry. T.T. I love this story! it's good to see I'm not only one who tortures my favorite characters in my fics.

I love your story, it's sad but interesting. Even before I read your fic, I have wonder myself what could happend if Saya wasn't real ? I was surprised by the "medical treatment" done on Train. I thought it was forbidden since years...
In any case, great story, I can't wait for the next chapter, poor Train.
(Sorry for my bad english, I'm french.)

Dear God poor Train. I'm taking AP psychology and I know what electro-shock therapy is. This is awful and amazing at the same time. Please you got to continue I need to know where this is going.

oh wow, this is so sad. poor Train. it's a very emotional piece, well written too. I like this a lot better then your other story.
also Eve wanting a cigarette. XD that made me so hard laugh, even though this fic makes me feel like crying. good job add humor.

whoa! this is so cool. I like where this story is going. very original and interesting. never read anything like it.