You should make a sequal

I like it but I don't like all the hostility towards Andy and all the rock throwing. Also, Tiffini is kinda annoying. I wouldn't hang with someone like that. Sorry but just a few more things, at the end Shea should have kissed Bran for real, not just on the cheek (I mean, he did save her life). At first it was amazing but you lost me when Andy was mentioned because then it was so much hate towards her and Bran. But it was a good idea for her to leave by going up the bucket. Overall, I liked it but Shea as a character doesn't seem like a good match for Bran. 1.) boys don't like aggressive girls 2.) boys don't like jealous girls 3.) If a girl hits a boy he isnt gonna like her. Its like the same thing as a boy hitting a girl. please don't hate me for my comments. When i get older i wanna be a screen writer and i have this very harsh judgement but its just because that's how all writers. And its kinda easy to see i don't like hurting peoples feelings so if you find what im valuable than good if not then just say "that bitch don't know nothin". Always remember to value your work.

really good could of put more romance between the brand and shea though but still great read:)

Aww, young love.

My kid sister can definitely relate to Tiffani in all that sugar and hyperness.

Awww! I love the Goonies! This was a good story. Like always, I'm sad it's over.

In other news, I watched Lost Boys for the first time today.

Awesome as usual. Enough said.

Woo! awesome story! I love you!

Awwwwww that ending was like a cliff hanger except it was the end... are you going to do a sequel?

Coolio :)

i am so glad andy left, she bugs me in the movie. she's alway's shrieking like a dramatic rodent. mikey and tiffani are so cute together. :) brand is a big sweaty greaseball i woonder if his character ever takes a shower, it'd be funny if shea or tiffani tripped him into the water off one eyed willie's ship for payback of being all googily eyed toward the andyish creature and alway's taking the dramatic red heads side.

someday's i feel like the cat garfield from the garfield comic strips my favorite food is lasania and i am so lazy sometimes. the couch sings to me and when the couches siren call over powers me to sit on it i get swallowed up until the couch eats me alive.

other times i dance around so much blasting either 'linkin park' or the 'backstreet boys' cause when i visit my parents house they tell me stop singing and dancing because they are just jelous of my amzing vocal talent. my mom used to yell at me ""iizzii! your going to make the hoouse callapse on all of us someday and were all going to die!"" but hey i thought i sounded good.

ANDY'S GONE! **fist pumps the air** YES!

Observation: There has been a lot of rock throwing in these last few chapters. lol.

I'm glad Andy's gone. I like that Stef still stayed.

Musical Cake was right. This story isn't as crazy as they usually are. I like it though. It's a nice break from the usual pace.

Confession time: As a kid Mrs./Ms. Fratellis scared the crap out of me.

FYI: Don't expect me not to freak out and scream some if there's a bat or any other creature in my hair.

And I hope Andy takes the bucket up.

That's funny, I thought I had never seen the goonies before, but I have just never seen the beginning. I saw a little before this, until the end.

hmm nice chapter. more please.