This is a good fic, but it's very confusing. Can you please set up something like an epilouge to explain this? Arigatou,

Shooting_Star

that was... interesting. I really liked it but I don't really understand... I'm dense! It was pretty cool tho. Write more!

omg! that was sooooo amazing! i love it! its a bit hard to follow...but thats part of it that i love..you continually switch views..never lingering on one for more than a bit...ooooo! its sad but definitely an equisite work, at least in my opinion! write more st tail fics, k? arigatou!

good but very confusing...keep up the good work...just try not to make it so confusing!

Asuka Jr! NOOOOO!

Good job- I'm not really a fan of Song Fics, but this one is well done. _

WOW. Not too many really good fics out there that express emotion the way yours does, and Saint Tail ones are even harder to find. Congratulations- it's a bit of a mystery, but I'd like to see it continued... if you plan on it. Otherwise, it's lovely on its own.

Keep up the good work! )